for Demigods on Chopped!8/28/2015 c4 Glorybringer
This is hilarious! :-) :-D :-P
This is hilarious! :-) :-D :-P
7/23/2015 c4 Guest
Dis is funny! Do another!
Dis is funny! Do another!
6/17/2015 c2 
3SpectabulousCat
O.M.G I couldn't stop laughing at the Percy and lobsters thing! Im literally crying of laughter! This is awesome!
3SpectabulousCatO.M.G I couldn't stop laughing at the Percy and lobsters thing! Im literally crying of laughter! This is awesome!
6/10/2015 c4 Guest
This story is probably the worst thing I have read for the Percy Jackson fanfiction community. The descriptive writing is poor, the characters are severely out of character, and what is worse you rushed everything. What is wrong with you, it looks like little kids writing this.
There is a thing called proof reading, writing a first draft, editing, grammar and spelling check, making sure the characters are in character. You did none of that, that is why this is bad fanfiction and not quality fanfiction.
It's also why I'm reporting it for poor grammar. Yes, that is a rule of the site.
This story is probably the worst thing I have read for the Percy Jackson fanfiction community. The descriptive writing is poor, the characters are severely out of character, and what is worse you rushed everything. What is wrong with you, it looks like little kids writing this.
There is a thing called proof reading, writing a first draft, editing, grammar and spelling check, making sure the characters are in character. You did none of that, that is why this is bad fanfiction and not quality fanfiction.
It's also why I'm reporting it for poor grammar. Yes, that is a rule of the site.
5/31/2015 c1 all.soul
It has a good consept, but a little choppy, try to put a little transition, but good otherwise! :D
It has a good consept, but a little choppy, try to put a little transition, but good otherwise! :D
5/18/2015 c3 Sandstorm12
Love it! PLease update soon! ;-)
Love it! PLease update soon! ;-)
5/12/2015 c3 Luisa
This is really good :) well done :)
This is really good :) well done :)
5/12/2015 c3 BlackShaftedArrow
Hahahaha oh Percy...hehehe...this was awesome. :) And I loved the John and Percy fight, that was epic. You never fail to make me laugh. :D
Hahahaha oh Percy...hehehe...this was awesome. :) And I loved the John and Percy fight, that was epic. You never fail to make me laugh. :D
4/29/2015 c2 2TwoLlamas
YOU. ARE. MY. NEW. FAVORITE. PERSON. I LOVE CHOPPED AND PJO AND THIS IS SO FUNNY AGHHH
2TwoLlamasYOU. ARE. MY. NEW. FAVORITE. PERSON. I LOVE CHOPPED AND PJO AND THIS IS SO FUNNY AGHHH
4/21/2015 c1 TheElementAir
Lol! I'd watch chopped after that..definitely! I like it :3 I laughed
Lol! I'd watch chopped after that..definitely! I like it :3 I laughed
4/17/2015 c1 Guest
Two of my favorite things!
Two of my favorite things!