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5/1/2015 c4 1Bobboky
Very good work
4/27/2015 c3 Bobboky
very cool
4/27/2015 c3 44sieg2013
Good writing
however, try to make your own story. maybe the reader will be interesting your original story.

anyway, keep writing, will you?

please don't stop writing, please?
if you try to focus only review from reviewer, I felt disappointed on you
4/24/2015 c3 13WolvenDragon
Good chapter, and I could have sowern I reviwed the last two chapters,oh well my bad. But like i said good chapter and great story can't wait to see what hapens next. Smily face XD
4/24/2015 c3 13Fallen Angel Codester
it was a good chapter,nice job :)

I think the lack of reviews is coming from the fact that it's an intensely small community for a crossover, so... I don't know, maybe that has something to do with it?
4/18/2015 c2 Fallen Angel Codester
Surprise, guess who :D

Anyway I felt obligated to check your story out because you've been so supportive of partners, and I must say, this story will be good. Of course I can't say much because this was just the opening redone for DHO, but I have a feeling this'll get good.
If I could say one thing, maybe try and have a bit more dialogue. It felt like you were just summing up everything that happened instead of the characters talking. Either way it was a better start than me, and I wish you the best of luck! :D
PS- I may not review every chapter cuz I'm lazy, but just remember in there reading it regardless!
-Fallen
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