for Naruto D Newgate the Storm11/28/2020 c1 Black Shisui Uchiha
Please update this story it’s amazing you can’t leave it unfinished
Please update this story it’s amazing you can’t leave it unfinished
14/30/2020 c3 Danirodriguez1995
Please continue, the story is very good, do not give up, please, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a fan of this type of stories and the truth is unmatched.
Please continue, the story is very good, do not give up, please, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a fan of this type of stories and the truth is unmatched.
12/15/2019 c1 omegaderose
did you put a D in naruto name to make it sound better because whitebear had no D in his name just Edward Newgate
did you put a D in naruto name to make it sound better because whitebear had no D in his name just Edward Newgate
6/13/2018 c2 Sharkboybeast
I don't like crossover we're people add everyone in the Naruto world to the one piece world. However it was a great story keep up the good work
I don't like crossover we're people add everyone in the Naruto world to the one piece world. However it was a great story keep up the good work
1/20/2018 c3 Guest
Naruto has kids with mei and boa handcock and kushina because he is not related to her in this fic and also because when he reaches his thirty or forty’s he’ll be sterile and make naruto gain a massive growths spirt after all he is the son of white beard so he shouldn’t be the size of a normal man he should be a giant and also have visible muscles not a slender physique but also make sure he has something big in his lower region so as to not give people the impression that he is overcompensating for a small sausage.
Naruto has kids with mei and boa handcock and kushina because he is not related to her in this fic and also because when he reaches his thirty or forty’s he’ll be sterile and make naruto gain a massive growths spirt after all he is the son of white beard so he shouldn’t be the size of a normal man he should be a giant and also have visible muscles not a slender physique but also make sure he has something big in his lower region so as to not give people the impression that he is overcompensating for a small sausage.