for Dimensional Edit4/2/2017 c1 Jack Cool
The fanfiction is a load of cocks
The fanfiction is a load of cocks
1/7/2016 c1 
10Samjok-o
please continue! I like the theory of this story where there's another world where Luminous is who is he thought to be(cough, pirate class, cough)
10Samjok-oplease continue! I like the theory of this story where there's another world where Luminous is who is he thought to be(cough, pirate class, cough)
11/21/2015 c2 Samjok-o
PLEASE CONTINUE!
([a voice in my head]-it's really great and it is amazing! I really like your theory and as [I] yelled up there before, please continue it!)
PLEASE CONTINUE!
([a voice in my head]-it's really great and it is amazing! I really like your theory and as [I] yelled up there before, please continue it!)
4/22/2015 c1 Anon since '06
It's been quite a while since I saw any new maple fics, let alone one that has quite an interesting plot to begin with. I really do hope you plan on continuing! ouo
It's been quite a while since I saw any new maple fics, let alone one that has quite an interesting plot to begin with. I really do hope you plan on continuing! ouo
4/22/2015 c1 I'm at work. It would be suicidal to login
It's been quite a while since I last saw any new maple fics, Let alone one with a rather interesting story. I really do hope you plan to continue!
It's been quite a while since I last saw any new maple fics, Let alone one with a rather interesting story. I really do hope you plan to continue!
4/23/2015 c2 Anonymous936
Wow, I am surprised.
Mēpuru no Sekai is basically just Maple World in Japanese (although Meipuru sounds more like Maple if said out loud). I am not criticizing your choice of names. This definitely rouses my interest.
Wow, I am surprised.
Mēpuru no Sekai is basically just Maple World in Japanese (although Meipuru sounds more like Maple if said out loud). I am not criticizing your choice of names. This definitely rouses my interest.
4/19/2015 c1 Unicorns
Cut and paste? The Latin thing is creeping me out.
Cut and paste? The Latin thing is creeping me out.
4/18/2015 c1 NekomimiToree
Um, not sure what you are trying to say with your Latin so I'm going to assume you are not a Latin scholar of any sort? I'm not well versed in Latin either, but I could take a crack at translating your lines from English to Latin if you'd like. Sorry if I'm mistaken though, since seeing Latin in stories makes me very excited for some reason.
The prologue is fine for a beginner. Most of your sentences refer to the heroes as a whole (i.e. "The heroes stood there..." "They started to connect..." "All of their eyes...") which makes the whole thing feel rather disorganized and vague. You might want to focus on one or two characters instead, using sentences such as "Freud's eye widened..." or "Phantom stood there...".
Um, not sure what you are trying to say with your Latin so I'm going to assume you are not a Latin scholar of any sort? I'm not well versed in Latin either, but I could take a crack at translating your lines from English to Latin if you'd like. Sorry if I'm mistaken though, since seeing Latin in stories makes me very excited for some reason.
The prologue is fine for a beginner. Most of your sentences refer to the heroes as a whole (i.e. "The heroes stood there..." "They started to connect..." "All of their eyes...") which makes the whole thing feel rather disorganized and vague. You might want to focus on one or two characters instead, using sentences such as "Freud's eye widened..." or "Phantom stood there...".