for The Demonic Medic2/6 c1 DarkHunter10
"It should be Itachi in these not me"...? Seriously? No... The 3rd would NOT even be thinking that, let alone saying it... Even WITHOUT the fact that there are NO Uchihas as kages.. EVER... The main simple fact is... Itachi is 13 when he killed his clan... THIRTEEN! There is NO KAGE, NO LEADER of ANYTHING that is going to be thinking of making a THIRTEEN year old, a KAGE! Not even Minato or Harashima would be considered for the position at that age, OR even CONSIDER doing that! Remember THE TIMELINES, here... The village would be the LAUGHING STOCK OF THE ELEMENTAL NATIONS! (also you've kinda made the third UTTERLY PATHETIC, if a FULL GROWN ADULT, needs a kid that can't even SHAVE YET, come in and LEAD people better.. Not really "god of the shinobi" or "the professor" here, if he believes a CHILD is better at THINKING!)
"It should be Itachi in these not me"...? Seriously? No... The 3rd would NOT even be thinking that, let alone saying it... Even WITHOUT the fact that there are NO Uchihas as kages.. EVER... The main simple fact is... Itachi is 13 when he killed his clan... THIRTEEN! There is NO KAGE, NO LEADER of ANYTHING that is going to be thinking of making a THIRTEEN year old, a KAGE! Not even Minato or Harashima would be considered for the position at that age, OR even CONSIDER doing that! Remember THE TIMELINES, here... The village would be the LAUGHING STOCK OF THE ELEMENTAL NATIONS! (also you've kinda made the third UTTERLY PATHETIC, if a FULL GROWN ADULT, needs a kid that can't even SHAVE YET, come in and LEAD people better.. Not really "god of the shinobi" or "the professor" here, if he believes a CHILD is better at THINKING!)
7/6/2024 c6 Llewey
Where did this sudden and unexplainable infatuation with the inverse of her canonical love come from. If anything she has more reason to want Naruto in this fic than originally and sasuke is just as annoying and standoffish
Where did this sudden and unexplainable infatuation with the inverse of her canonical love come from. If anything she has more reason to want Naruto in this fic than originally and sasuke is just as annoying and standoffish
4/17/2024 c4 kahlgolee
Seeing these reviews have discouraged me. So much wasted potential. Sasuke and Hinata? Hinata as a rape victim? Naruto as mostly a sharingan user? Uchiha cock gobbling nonsense.
Seeing these reviews have discouraged me. So much wasted potential. Sasuke and Hinata? Hinata as a rape victim? Naruto as mostly a sharingan user? Uchiha cock gobbling nonsense.
8/12/2023 c2 Guest
I Don’t get it Naruto just met them he has no reason to reveal his secret that’s just bad writing smh
I Don’t get it Naruto just met them he has no reason to reveal his secret that’s just bad writing smh
4/7/2022 c1 Aedwards179
if his chakra replenishes enough to use super strength 24/7 then that would be the perfect way to increase chakra reserves. just keep his muscles enhanced all the time. it'll constantly drain his chakra but not enough to make him pass out from chakra exhaustion
if his chakra replenishes enough to use super strength 24/7 then that would be the perfect way to increase chakra reserves. just keep his muscles enhanced all the time. it'll constantly drain his chakra but not enough to make him pass out from chakra exhaustion
3/15/2022 c23 Some dude
It was good while it lasted, everything feels like it's dragging out, adding bending could be cool but your execution of it make it seem to easy to developed and too similar to avatar.
It was good while it lasted, everything feels like it's dragging out, adding bending could be cool but your execution of it make it seem to easy to developed and too similar to avatar.
5/12/2021 c5 
18Luciendar
Wow, I never knew I could go from enjoying a story to finding it ridiculous so quickly. Does kakashi think the sun shines out of Sasuke's ass or something? Jesus. Not to mention that God awful advice. If we're going into a unknown combat zone shoot a giant fucking fireball. There could be captives or explosives that could hurt us in turn but do it anyway. That's what's so fun about it being unknown. I hate the life I wasted on this chapter.
And as much as I don't care for Naruto and Hinata being together, her crushing on Sasuke is worse.
18LuciendarWow, I never knew I could go from enjoying a story to finding it ridiculous so quickly. Does kakashi think the sun shines out of Sasuke's ass or something? Jesus. Not to mention that God awful advice. If we're going into a unknown combat zone shoot a giant fucking fireball. There could be captives or explosives that could hurt us in turn but do it anyway. That's what's so fun about it being unknown. I hate the life I wasted on this chapter.
And as much as I don't care for Naruto and Hinata being together, her crushing on Sasuke is worse.
11/14/2020 c17 Kristina Johnson
How come naruto hasn’t had any secret summoning training or will that be with the toads? Is that the namakaze family summons?
How come naruto hasn’t had any secret summoning training or will that be with the toads? Is that the namakaze family summons?
11/14/2020 c11 Kristina Johnson
I bet he got fire affinity from the nine tails fox after the curse seal
I bet he got fire affinity from the nine tails fox after the curse seal