for I Had You1/13/2017 c1 
3Primrose Angel
This is great for a first fic! My feedback is to try and vary your use of language to make your writing more expressive and emotional. That being said, this was a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing!
3Primrose AngelThis is great for a first fic! My feedback is to try and vary your use of language to make your writing more expressive and emotional. That being said, this was a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing!
8/24/2016 c1 1KawaiiGirl1215
That was one of the best Your Lie in April stories I've ever read! I loved the ending, and Kaori and Kousei were in perfect character.
1KawaiiGirl1215That was one of the best Your Lie in April stories I've ever read! I loved the ending, and Kaori and Kousei were in perfect character.
1/31/2016 c1 Mohamed.B02
Thank u man this was one of the best fanfics I saw in my life it was so well written and that exactly what could've happened...and the ending made me cry ... Thank u
Thank u man this was one of the best fanfics I saw in my life it was so well written and that exactly what could've happened...and the ending made me cry ... Thank u
1/6/2016 c1 Tenten1001
I liked the lead up, but I thought the ending was anticlimactic. Good story. Thanks for your work.
I liked the lead up, but I thought the ending was anticlimactic. Good story. Thanks for your work.
9/16/2015 c1 yung coffee mate
FUCK YU
But hey, there's a good balance in dialogue and narration, I like that
The narration is good too; very flow of consciousness-y lol
You can really feel wdf Kousei iz feelin', and it's worded very well
The emotion/mood is brought out nicely, I feel d feelz
t(OwOt)
FUCK YU
But hey, there's a good balance in dialogue and narration, I like that
The narration is good too; very flow of consciousness-y lol
You can really feel wdf Kousei iz feelin', and it's worded very well
The emotion/mood is brought out nicely, I feel d feelz
t(OwOt)
9/6/2015 c1 The Flame of a Raindrop
Wooooooaaaah this is so good! I take it I see another author whose first draft is the one they publish (I find it really hard to reread my own work, so I just have to hope for the best when I think about typos) XD you portrayed Kousei's character really well! I always struggle when I write him even in third person, but you did the hard thing and wrote in first. :) I'd love to see a fluff scene, even if she comes back as a ghost and there's the whole "can't touch each other" cliché, but it's really up to you ;) nice job!
Wooooooaaaah this is so good! I take it I see another author whose first draft is the one they publish (I find it really hard to reread my own work, so I just have to hope for the best when I think about typos) XD you portrayed Kousei's character really well! I always struggle when I write him even in third person, but you did the hard thing and wrote in first. :) I'd love to see a fluff scene, even if she comes back as a ghost and there's the whole "can't touch each other" cliché, but it's really up to you ;) nice job!
5/14/2015 c1 BRO MO
WHY. WHY. W H Y.
WHY. WHY. W H Y.
4/19/2015 c1 Mermaid Monster
This leaves a sort of heavy feeling in my chest. You really brought out the mood of the anime/manga and the characters' personalities perfectly, especially Kaori! I could totally imagine her threatening him to empty his wallet for her if he didn't answer her question. Great job with this oneshot, even though I was hoping for more fluffiness.
This leaves a sort of heavy feeling in my chest. You really brought out the mood of the anime/manga and the characters' personalities perfectly, especially Kaori! I could totally imagine her threatening him to empty his wallet for her if he didn't answer her question. Great job with this oneshot, even though I was hoping for more fluffiness.