for My Master Ed3/6 c1 ZoyeZest
Hey there! I hope you're doing great!
I just finished reading your story My Master Ed, and I absolutely loved it! I'd be thrilled to adapt it into my comic style or even animation. I'd work on it as a commission, and I think you'd really enjoy the final result something you might even want to share!
I'm a digital artist open for commissions and have a few spots available. I work on various types of artwork, my rates are reasonable, and I always deliver high-quality pieces. If you're interested, let’s discuss it further!
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Looking forward to hearing from you!
Hey there! I hope you're doing great!
I just finished reading your story My Master Ed, and I absolutely loved it! I'd be thrilled to adapt it into my comic style or even animation. I'd work on it as a commission, and I think you'd really enjoy the final result something you might even want to share!
I'm a digital artist open for commissions and have a few spots available. I work on various types of artwork, my rates are reasonable, and I always deliver high-quality pieces. If you're interested, let’s discuss it further!
You can reach me here:
- Discord: baran59354
- Email: baran59354 gmail com
- Twitter: ZoyeZest
- Instagram: baran59354
Looking forward to hearing from you!
9/17/2024 c1 naedinefebruary2.0
One of my favorite moments in your story is when Ed asks Twenty Three what name he would want for himself, completely shifting the dynamic between them. This simple question reveals so much about Ed's character—his willingness to treat Twenty Three as an individual rather than just a slave. It’s a powerful moment that highlights the stark contrast between their previous lives and opens up a glimmer of hope for Twenty Three. I love how this interaction not only emphasizes Ed's rebellious spirit but also sparks a sense of identity in Twenty Three, making me root for his journey of self-discovery and freedom!
One of my favorite moments in your story is when Ed asks Twenty Three what name he would want for himself, completely shifting the dynamic between them. This simple question reveals so much about Ed's character—his willingness to treat Twenty Three as an individual rather than just a slave. It’s a powerful moment that highlights the stark contrast between their previous lives and opens up a glimmer of hope for Twenty Three. I love how this interaction not only emphasizes Ed's rebellious spirit but also sparks a sense of identity in Twenty Three, making me root for his journey of self-discovery and freedom!
8/12/2024 c15 Merlikuty
oh darn, my condolences for the job hope you can get another you can enjoy and appreciate you.
on another topic, i really loved this chapter. do you post on ao3 as well? for its popularity rn i recommend if you wish to, this is a really good work of art
thank you for the update, have a nice day!
oh darn, my condolences for the job hope you can get another you can enjoy and appreciate you.
on another topic, i really loved this chapter. do you post on ao3 as well? for its popularity rn i recommend if you wish to, this is a really good work of art
thank you for the update, have a nice day!
7/30/2024 c15 MoonlightLoveSong
Love this fic very much, thank you so much for writing this amazing fic! 3 3
Love this fic very much, thank you so much for writing this amazing fic! 3 3
6/24/2024 c15 Guest
Ah I see, using the “Immortal soldiers” question as a morality test for Eiliar clever.
Ah I see, using the “Immortal soldiers” question as a morality test for Eiliar clever.
6/23/2024 c15 headphoneliz
Sorry to hear about your job, I hope the perfect one comes your way soon.
I loved this chapter! Ed really gets around, he is juggling so many activities. I loved the Ed and Van interactions we got to see, they have such a good relationship. Poor Al is really trying his best, that’s a rough situation to be in. The intrigue with Amestris only grows, I’m very excited to see how it continues. I also really liked how
Ed is really so brazen I loved him quoting Gen Raven there at the end! That makes for such a fun reversal. This was such a great chapter, this fic rocks as always!
Sorry to hear about your job, I hope the perfect one comes your way soon.
I loved this chapter! Ed really gets around, he is juggling so many activities. I loved the Ed and Van interactions we got to see, they have such a good relationship. Poor Al is really trying his best, that’s a rough situation to be in. The intrigue with Amestris only grows, I’m very excited to see how it continues. I also really liked how
Ed is really so brazen I loved him quoting Gen Raven there at the end! That makes for such a fun reversal. This was such a great chapter, this fic rocks as always!
6/23/2024 c15 
18Mel72000
I suggest a good solution for the Temple of Evil : Edward transmutes mysteriously all their gold in lead, they are ruined, can't to buy slaves for their sacrifices, ridiculized, a subject of mockery and if it's done with special effect, supersticious peoples will run away from it and will cease to give offerings.
And Edward can remburse a part of his debt to the society from transmuting gold, sparing the Xerxès economy and killing one of their evil cults, make a good action and above all, take pleasure to make that spectacular for his own pleasure.
Joindre l'utile à l'agréable with a good action ! Ideal.
18Mel72000I suggest a good solution for the Temple of Evil : Edward transmutes mysteriously all their gold in lead, they are ruined, can't to buy slaves for their sacrifices, ridiculized, a subject of mockery and if it's done with special effect, supersticious peoples will run away from it and will cease to give offerings.
And Edward can remburse a part of his debt to the society from transmuting gold, sparing the Xerxès economy and killing one of their evil cults, make a good action and above all, take pleasure to make that spectacular for his own pleasure.
Joindre l'utile à l'agréable with a good action ! Ideal.
10/25/2023 c1 Guest
This is weird. Hohenheim doesn't really have that much temper even when he was a slave. he was quite content with his life. it's only the dwarf in the flask who kept tempting him(not saying it's bad) but it's really weird reading Hohenheim with temper. I would always see him as a shy pushover man hahaha
This is weird. Hohenheim doesn't really have that much temper even when he was a slave. he was quite content with his life. it's only the dwarf in the flask who kept tempting him(not saying it's bad) but it's really weird reading Hohenheim with temper. I would always see him as a shy pushover man hahaha
8/30/2023 c14 headphoneliz
Alphonse?!
I’m so excited this story updated! And what an absolute ride this last chapter was! Ed meeting Rayan in this chapter was such a surprise. I didn’t think that would happen until way later. Also Ed getting to talk with Amestris was very cute! Poor Ed is becoming such a local legend too, everyone seems to know him lol. I can’t believe Al has been alive this whole time! I’m glad that Ed has someone else from his time, even if he doesn’t realize it yet.
(Ps I think ff glitched, I didn’t get an email for this chapter and I’m betting none of the other people who follow this story did either. )
Alphonse?!
I’m so excited this story updated! And what an absolute ride this last chapter was! Ed meeting Rayan in this chapter was such a surprise. I didn’t think that would happen until way later. Also Ed getting to talk with Amestris was very cute! Poor Ed is becoming such a local legend too, everyone seems to know him lol. I can’t believe Al has been alive this whole time! I’m glad that Ed has someone else from his time, even if he doesn’t realize it yet.
(Ps I think ff glitched, I didn’t get an email for this chapter and I’m betting none of the other people who follow this story did either. )
8/27/2023 c14 Mel72000
Yep, I guessed. Years of Bible teaching when I was young.
And I love how you create a bond between The Homonculus (Théo means God...) and the people who believes in one deity...
Edward meets finally another ally who shearched him and found him in hour of need : Ask and you will find... Truth's intervention ?
And Alphonse is "alive". Ths concept is really large in FMA... But he is here !
Oh, and I recall that Edward WAS feeling totally guilt to use the souls of Envy to open the Gate in Glutony. He uses this terrible guilt to have sacrificied lifes to save his own life in recalling this painful feeling when he uses human transmutation on himself.
And even if one soul said him Thank You for freeing them, Edward has known that he has done what he pledged to never do...Use a philosophal stone. Like Alphonse when he fought Kimblee with the stone.
Alphonse, be careful, Edward would react how if you call help when he believes that he has prevented your birth ? He will believe that his remorse kills him...
Yep, I guessed. Years of Bible teaching when I was young.
And I love how you create a bond between The Homonculus (Théo means God...) and the people who believes in one deity...
Edward meets finally another ally who shearched him and found him in hour of need : Ask and you will find... Truth's intervention ?
And Alphonse is "alive". Ths concept is really large in FMA... But he is here !
Oh, and I recall that Edward WAS feeling totally guilt to use the souls of Envy to open the Gate in Glutony. He uses this terrible guilt to have sacrificied lifes to save his own life in recalling this painful feeling when he uses human transmutation on himself.
And even if one soul said him Thank You for freeing them, Edward has known that he has done what he pledged to never do...Use a philosophal stone. Like Alphonse when he fought Kimblee with the stone.
Alphonse, be careful, Edward would react how if you call help when he believes that he has prevented your birth ? He will believe that his remorse kills him...
8/27/2023 c14 Queen White
Just found this story via TV Tropes! It’s so good (coming from someone not in the FMA fandom). I’m going to try to find you on AO3 because I prefer that site lol
Just found this story via TV Tropes! It’s so good (coming from someone not in the FMA fandom). I’m going to try to find you on AO3 because I prefer that site lol
8/23/2023 c14 Tehb'Ineh
I don't often leave reviews, but wanted you to know you've got someone who'll come back when you post. Also... Hyped
I don't often leave reviews, but wanted you to know you've got someone who'll come back when you post. Also... Hyped
4/2/2023 c13 9KaylinElemental15
Was surprised to stumble across this fic again after so long that I decided to give it another read (binge read it for 3 days straight lol). I really love the direction you're going with this story and the characters are so well written! Also like how you wrote Edward dealing with his grief. Poor boy's been through enough- why, Truth? WHYYYYYYYY! That said, it really is both interesting and hilarious how good AND bad he is at lying. Had to look back at the manga to see what you meant when you mentioned Andal was mentioned- never noticed that at all! Wonder how Hohenheim had managed to settle things with Andal during that time... Also, I like how intriguing the characters like Tigress, Eiliar, Ava, and Amestris are. Had a feeling that Eiliar especially was going to have a major role or something and BAM! TURNS OUT HE DOES?! Anyway, I really like the direction you're going with this story. Keep it up!
9KaylinElemental15Was surprised to stumble across this fic again after so long that I decided to give it another read (binge read it for 3 days straight lol). I really love the direction you're going with this story and the characters are so well written! Also like how you wrote Edward dealing with his grief. Poor boy's been through enough- why, Truth? WHYYYYYYYY! That said, it really is both interesting and hilarious how good AND bad he is at lying. Had to look back at the manga to see what you meant when you mentioned Andal was mentioned- never noticed that at all! Wonder how Hohenheim had managed to settle things with Andal during that time... Also, I like how intriguing the characters like Tigress, Eiliar, Ava, and Amestris are. Had a feeling that Eiliar especially was going to have a major role or something and BAM! TURNS OUT HE DOES?! Anyway, I really like the direction you're going with this story. Keep it up!