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4/17/2022 c14 BrightEyes01
I enjoyed the more grown-up versions of Kate and Rick you gave us in this unique story. I also throughly enjoyed this version of Alexis. So very much her father's daughter. And Fitz was absolutely perfect. Thank you for sharing your story.
12/9/2021 c9 Vishw
I'm sorry to say but except for Alexis taking down Rogan, this was a ridiculous chapter...
12/9/2021 c8 Vishw
Ugh! I was really hoping you wouldn't go there... but after such a good chapter, that line left me feeling disappointed...
12/9/2021 c7 Vishw
Uh oh!
12/9/2021 c6 Vishw
That last line was cherry on top!
12/9/2021 c3 Vishw
Man! What a crappy person Beckett is!
12/9/2021 c1 Vishw
That was kinda anti-climatic after all the build-up! Not really a complaint, just how I felt.

Castle felt a bit OOC to me, cause I don't recall him ever being so over the top fidgety...
2/12/2021 c13 cabreradepartamento
Great story a very powerful legal and security team for sure the lawyer and the inventor can go around the capitol and dispatch a certain senator although surely the subject would prefer the FBI than that pair.
5/20/2020 c14 19wendykw
In my endeavor to read or reread all your fics, this one has been a fun read. I don't remember reading it before, and Fitz is one of the best original characters I've read in a fanfic. I'm hoping he reappears somewhere in your other fics.
Rick's efforts to protect Kate, her reputation, and her career are the heart of this story. I've been amused, amazed and awed by his efforts and the unintended consequences of his curiosity. Great story. Thank you.
6/13/2019 c14 Tom Knutson
OUTSTANDING! ! CAN YOU PLEASE KEEP WRITING! !
9/25/2017 c14 Guest
Great. Love it!
9/6/2017 c14 helensorrento
Loved it! I hope you continue the story.
7/4/2017 c14 gngoa
I enjoyed this so much, thank you for sharing your talent and imagination.
5/3/2017 c6 Castlelover777
This was such a beautiful chapter! It literally made me cry. Your comparison of Rick's love to a thunderstorm is remarkable. It's perfectly apt, and also explains Kate's fears in the face of such an overwhelming love. I loved it!
3/17/2017 c14 3Perfgen
Just found this story. Amazing, Two Thumbs up!
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