10/20/2020 c1 anonymous
Wow, this is really good so far. A tip probably is that you should try to make it slightly more realistic. Also, maybe adding in a lil more sensory details and make their lives as realistic as possible with their dilemma. Also, since I have a bias, please include Will angst. Thanks!

5/18/2016 c1 Guest
That was bad what were you thinking that is taribul why would you right something like this?

4/25/2015 c1 Erikathomas
I'm really excited for this story! The prologue was phenomenal.

4/24/2015 c1 Must-Think-Of-Username
Oh my Gods I'm loving this already! I really like this idea. It's very original.