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7/17/2023 c23 Guest
it’s ight
8/28/2021 c1 Strayshark3005
Really enjoyed this story some parts of the story seemed wired like the part when Felia got her feet injured but overall I had a good time reading this story.
11/26/2020 c16 Saftey Orks wif Steam zilla
Comic relief? In 40k! We call that the Orks
11/3/2020 c7 Guest
Is that a conscript reference?!
11/2/2020 c5 Guest
Was that an ostruppen reference?!
10/6/2020 c1 Boi
Tau r the best obvi
7/9/2020 c23 Look2020
I liked the Epilogue!
4/9/2020 c4 StonerMcWeedPot
Holy shit dude the dialogue is so forced.
4/9/2020 c3 StonerMcWeedPot
The attempts at humor are pretty bad, it just comes across as lazy writing and feels really out of place. The dialogue doesn’t feel genuine either at times.
4/9/2020 c2 StonerMcWeedPot
Never mind I misread
4/9/2020 c1 StonerMcWeedPot
Was there a reason to kill Darelyn? She seemed like an interesting character.
12/11/2019 c7 3GreyscaleWriter
what if the absolutely most depraved sexual indulgence is foot fetishes, and the eldar ended up having a huge orgy dedicated to foot fetishes and thats what spawned slaanesh
11/5/2019 c23 PrazniFrizider
So is there a next arc? Amazing story btw.
10/23/2019 c23 Donbasos
So, finally here, I have to say, interesting read. Had a good time. Really liked the complete change of pase in this story, normally reading about happy heroes, to now a more somber down to earth story where the main character makes the best of his circumstances. Thanks for letting me know about this one!
10/16/2019 c2 PonyChampion
Wow, great story so far. I love how the story is unfolding slowly, it makes it more interesting to find out what happens next. Plus, I a sucker for Female eldarxHuman male pairing.
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