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3/1/2016 c7 20thepkrmgc
its good to see that jaune has made a friend, and while the development of myrtlenaster is really interesting (no way is he going to share jaunes interest in weiss after seeing it) i suspect hes going to have some explaining to do in the aftermath
3/1/2016 c6 thepkrmgc
since aura seems to be magic, i wonder what unlocking jaunes will be?

since shirous entering beacon early i wonder how the timeline will change.
3/1/2016 c5 thepkrmgc
it might have been better to tell someone with authority about the warners condition instead of resoriting to mental manipulation, I wonder what other connections exist between the two worlds besides the burial agency?
3/1/2016 c4 thepkrmgc
hopefully jaune will be a good influence, and warners can find a better solution
3/1/2016 c3 thepkrmgc
i suppose that shirou is similar enough to jaune to fill the role, and its not as if anyones going to suspect the whole "mentally replaced by the spirit of a transdimensional hero" thing (except perhaphs nora)
3/1/2016 c2 thepkrmgc
its probably for the best that shirou tells them everything, theres no way he could make a reasonable explanation and the whole "possessing/killing their son" thing is bound to be an issue regardless so its better to get it out of the way now
3/1/2016 c1 thepkrmgc
it seems like jaune got his wish to be a hero, though its a shame he had to die, i wonder how shirou will deal with jaune's legacy
2/28/2016 c28 176Firehedgehog
niiice
2/24/2016 c4 Guest
Bringing in the grail and the grail war and the heroic spirits ruins what could be an outstandingly amazing story making it only a good story. Since it is still a a good story I will continue to read but I weep for all the potential that has been wasted
2/24/2016 c3 Guest
If shirous soul had consumed Haynes soul then that means une souls had become a part of shirous soul giving shirou access to, at the very least, all of jaunes memories
2/24/2016 c3 Guest
Shirou would except ANY powerup that better enabled him to protect the innocent and be a Hero so long as said powerup didn't result in seriously harming anyone innocent
2/24/2016 c28 Guest
While your story isn't bad you've made the smae mistake that pretty much all authors do when making a crossover fic instead of just thrusting a character into new world you try to blend the 2 world's together which greatly over complicates your story fate/stay night and its iterations have a highly diverse highly complicated story and combing its story/complications with rwby and remnant makes your story Ao unnecessarily complex and complicated that it greatly lessens the quality of your story
2/24/2016 c2 Guest
Instead of having shirou essentially murder jaune you should of had jaune and shirou merge and become one person and have the merging process stabilise shirous mind so he was a more normal person basically Haines personality backed up by shirous skills/memories/knowledge/experience
2/23/2016 c28 Guest
Good stuff, I quite like the ending.
2/22/2016 c28 Guest
Shirou forgot about the BEAST class Servant; if the others had been summoned before on his world, I cannot see BEAST having failed to. Think the inverse of Saver; a Destroyer.

The power that a Ruler wielded was ridiculous,
It wasn’t that ridiculous. The Ruler generated its own prana because it was more like Install than a Servant Summon, but its stats were not amazing. It possessing 14 command seals was its high point.

How are the Excalibur Images EX class? The one it is based on is A double plus and there is a degradation on their copies of it. how is it stronger than the original?

Why is the Church willing to kill off everyone on Remnant to keep the military out of the fight?
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