for worlds collide5/1/2015 c1 
19SheikahLover
Hey, this isn't too bad of a start, but there are A LOT of mistakes, even in the summary. If you would like some help with editing, I wouldn't mind becoming a beta reader for your story. I've written quite a few DGM x InuYasha stories. :) If you're interested, I would mostly help with cleaning up the spelling and grammar of the story, feel free to respond. This seems like a good story and if these issues were cleaned up I'm positive it would become even better. :P
19SheikahLoverHey, this isn't too bad of a start, but there are A LOT of mistakes, even in the summary. If you would like some help with editing, I wouldn't mind becoming a beta reader for your story. I've written quite a few DGM x InuYasha stories. :) If you're interested, I would mostly help with cleaning up the spelling and grammar of the story, feel free to respond. This seems like a good story and if these issues were cleaned up I'm positive it would become even better. :P
4/27/2015 c1 70Inuyasharocks01862
Nice,nice,nice, except yu called a day at the beach instead of world's collide
70Inuyasharocks01862Nice,nice,nice, except yu called a day at the beach instead of world's collide