for Harry potter and the End of All3/11/2017 c10 Lucinda Silver
I like it, but I kept getting distracted by the repeated grammatical errors like 'gandalf' and 'harry' when they should be 'Gandalf' and 'Harry' with capitalized first letter of their names.
Also, I felt this story is a bit rush somewhat. There's still need a bit of editing to be done.
I like it, but I kept getting distracted by the repeated grammatical errors like 'gandalf' and 'harry' when they should be 'Gandalf' and 'Harry' with capitalized first letter of their names.
Also, I felt this story is a bit rush somewhat. There's still need a bit of editing to be done.
9/24/2016 c10 
7Dark Serpent Cat
Hi so interesting fic but I do have a request
On the first chapter could you put a warning that it is a Thorin/Bilbo pairing
I have nothing wrong with it but I was hoping this would be a Thorin/Harry pairing so warning would be nice
7Dark Serpent CatHi so interesting fic but I do have a request
On the first chapter could you put a warning that it is a Thorin/Bilbo pairing
I have nothing wrong with it but I was hoping this would be a Thorin/Harry pairing so warning would be nice
7/28/2016 c10 2NekoAngel13
Dude this is so cool :D I'm so geared up on the action, it's so cool. I hope this is updated someday cause I'd love to see what happens next and how things change, especially the whole Thranduil situation X3
2NekoAngel13Dude this is so cool :D I'm so geared up on the action, it's so cool. I hope this is updated someday cause I'd love to see what happens next and how things change, especially the whole Thranduil situation X3
7/14/2016 c10 Guest
This is fantastic! You've managed to balance Harry's power Perfectly! I cant wait to see what comes next
This is fantastic! You've managed to balance Harry's power Perfectly! I cant wait to see what comes next
6/15/2016 c10 Guest
Love this stoey
Love this stoey
6/2/2016 c10 singingoompaloompas
I love it! Thanks for sharing. I look forward to seeing how things will develop.
I love it! Thanks for sharing. I look forward to seeing how things will develop.
4/4/2016 c10 8warriorfb
You continue what you started, that is something not many can say, so, welcome back, and nice chapter:)
8warriorfbYou continue what you started, that is something not many can say, so, welcome back, and nice chapter:)
1/18/2016 c11 Guest
Hope everything goes well. Will keep an eye out for updates.
Hope everything goes well. Will keep an eye out for updates.
11/13/2015 c10 1Kiara.Queen.of.Kaos
:) Thank you for writing this awesome story and posting it to FFnet.
1Kiara.Queen.of.Kaos:) Thank you for writing this awesome story and posting it to FFnet.