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12/27/2015 c1 11Senile-felineS
Yeah, the timing is still messed. At the begining you said 11 years ago. This would make Luna 16, yes, but Phantasia (cool name, btw) only 11. Later you said 13 years after the end, which sets Phantasia's age right but would make Luna 18, not 16.
7/25/2015 c35 5Vulpix's Fire
That was so sad.. Yet it was also beautiful.
Thank you for creating this story!
6/23/2015 c32 Vulpix's Fire
Mermaids, too? I guess the war raged over water as well!
Other then that this chapter was so sad. Poor Solaria.
6/20/2015 c31 Vulpix's Fire
How many children will there be? At this point it feels like the story should be called "Being a mother". Just kidding, but seriously how many children will there be?
Great story and writing as always.
6/16/2015 c30 Vulpix's Fire
Wow! Valkyries, too! You must love putting many different mythical beings in this story. It makes it a whole lot better and really helps to expanse the world that the characters live in.
5/26/2015 c21 Vulpix's Fire
WOW! It just keeps getting better. I can barely wait for the next chapter. And I love your style of writing, it mixes well with the characters. :)
5/23/2015 c18 Vulpix's Fire
Erutis is dead! That's so sad. I guess I should've seen it coming, but still it makes me want to cry.
5/21/2015 c17 Vulpix's Fire
Awe! Now Nathaniel is going to be a father. Can't wait for the next chapter.
5/15/2015 c13 Vulpix's Fire
Wow! I love this story, it amazing to say the least. I also enjoy your writing style. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

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