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1/2 c16 3KarmanamiWeirdo
I feel rlly bad for manami...having your physical attributes that you may be insecure about highlighted and treated as an issue almost always has a significant impact on your self-esteem. i know they have a vision, but looking at her chest as if its something to be 'pitied' and then Rio making the comment on being able to 'fix' it just made me really mad, because if people acted like that with me I would go home certain that there was something wrong with my body and that it shouldn't look like that. i get you were trying to write a funny moment (and a lot of people thought it was one) but as someone with a small chest as well, I've always been made to feel like less of a woman because of it which is why that scene just didn't sit well with me. No offence, but it just felt like it was saying that having a small chest is pathetic and it needs to be altered for you to be likeable.

Don't get me wrong btw! i really like this story which is probably why I'm being so critical. and the mustard and ketchup thing was absolutely hilarious, you're definitely a very talented writer! i just have some personal issues due to my own insecurities lol
12/31/2023 c5 8CowPride
I love this fic. Truly believe I do. But it still bugs me that Okuda is such a push over. I mean she IS. It makes sense for the setting, yes, but still. Wasn't she trained in combat/endurance for a whole year? Even if she never was the best back in class 3-E she should have some moves. And besides I believe her forte was situation assessment and quick response, no? So I don't believe she could be led so batlantly to the shed, not when Okuda herself had a bad feeling about it. Anyway. Still love the situation tho ahaha. You can take the girl out of the shōjo tropes but you can't take the shōjo tropes out of the girl. The drama is on point
11/7/2023 c12 3KarmanamiWeirdo
SUMMER BREAK FOR 3 MONTHS? DAMN THATS LONG. Thats how I know ur from America bc in Japan and Europe summer break is only a little over a month anyways this is my 3rd time reading this story and its as good as ever but its also so interesting how I'm able to pick up on sm more things bc of the difference in age lol
3/9/2023 c34 3bee.a bear
just got back to reading in fanfiction and im ecstatic that i came back with this story finished! Thank u so much for finishing and the ending was great
9/8/2021 c34 1Tris PhantomEvans
[looks at the cringy 2014 username I still use to write this comment] yes, it’s been an era alright haha.

I’m honestly happy you chose to complete this, regardless of what quality you may have sacrificed. I logged onto this account to revisit old fics I was obsessed with as tiny teen and yours so happed to be one of them. so little content for this pairing man. they deserve so much for all the potential they hold. straight out of a shoujo with all the badass elements of being assassins. I love it here. I’m grateful for all the effort you poured into them, I could tell you had lots of fun with this and I was giddy to see a longer and bigger narrative written out for them. thank you so much for writing this. I look forward to read where else your pen and muse have decided to lead you next! I sincerely believed and still believe that you’re a skilled writer, and want to see how you improved over the years! :D
8/18/2021 c9 6xHNNHx
We must, first, thank Rio for bringing them together. You have no idea how relieved I was at the outcome.
8/16/2021 c6 xHNNHx
Loved it
Manami's thoughts are really emotional and intriguing.
6/16/2021 c33 297699767660
"You stop! Stop thinking you have all of this in your hands! Stop thinking that you have to carry my happiness with you because you don't! My happiness can only be made by my own hands! No one made you in charge of it!"

oh yes you tell him baby girl!
6/16/2021 c32 297699767660
this chapter almost physically hurted me
6/1/2021 c34 49Shiranai Atsune
OMG. THIS IS IT. THE FINAL CHAPTER! THIS WAS SUCH A GREAT STORY. THANK YOU FOR GIVING US CLOSURE! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!
6/1/2021 c34 21FandomSupporter15
Hello! it’s been a long long long time and my how much has happened! I’m glad you came back to your story and finished it even though it’s not what we’re both expecting, but I glad you completed in your spare time. I’m gonna be rereading your story from start to finish, I don’t remember much plot wise, but I will never forget how much joy it brought me reading this the first time.

Remember how I asked you if I could make a manga from your story back then… I never got around doing that or did more than what I hoped to do. But now, I think I’ll draw my moments from your story instead if you allow me too… and if you’re still check in such a inactive fandom since 2016.
I’ll send them your way when I draw anything from here, so what other social media are you mostly on or easier to show you?
5/31/2021 c33 49Shiranai Atsune
Yey! A new update!

OMG. THIS IS JUST PART 1?!
5/10/2021 c32 ThatweirdgirlP
Bruh ok I’m amazed yet so surprised that ur still writing this fic that is literally like 6 years old. Omg I was in middle school when this fic was still in its middle arc? Idk where okuda got stuck in some building but like geez. I came here for nostalgia but I was still surprised that it was still updating. Kudos to ur dedication. How do u not lose interest in the anime manga the fandom is pretty much dead. I admire ur dedication. I hope to see this fic have a complete status.
4/16/2021 c32 Guest
Cant wait for the next parts!
4/9/2021 c32 Well
Pls update
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