
1/25/2021 c30
131TheRoseShadow21
Ahhh, these would have been such emotional chapters! I'm liking these summaries and am looking forward to the rest

Ahhh, these would have been such emotional chapters! I'm liking these summaries and am looking forward to the rest
1/25/2021 c30 Koripuru
AAAAAH THIS WAS AMAZING ! I now remember how absolutely ENAMORING your dialogues were. Karma's line after Manami's performance, just- wow. RIO AND YUZUKI BONDING? YES PLEASE and OML I love LOVE their character development. God, the way young Manami acted, you wrote her SO WELL I'm still in awe. AND INARI STANDING UP OUT OF THE CROW LOVE HER SO MUCH, I absolutely adore the relationship you've created between Inari and Manami, and albeit I am QUITE SAD about the ending of this arc, I am SO EXCITED FOR WINTER BREAK.
I hope you've had a wonderful day, make sure to take care of yourself ! You're doing amazing 3 3 3
AAAAAH THIS WAS AMAZING ! I now remember how absolutely ENAMORING your dialogues were. Karma's line after Manami's performance, just- wow. RIO AND YUZUKI BONDING? YES PLEASE and OML I love LOVE their character development. God, the way young Manami acted, you wrote her SO WELL I'm still in awe. AND INARI STANDING UP OUT OF THE CROW LOVE HER SO MUCH, I absolutely adore the relationship you've created between Inari and Manami, and albeit I am QUITE SAD about the ending of this arc, I am SO EXCITED FOR WINTER BREAK.
I hope you've had a wonderful day, make sure to take care of yourself ! You're doing amazing 3 3 3
1/25/2021 c29
4Grimnir Esjay
Well you had a great run, the memories in this fanfic for me was probably the best one as it was one of the earliest fanfics I've read in general especially from one of my favourite ships in this series. But still I can't help but wonder at this chapter being the end of the beginning for the fanfic as a while and I wonder how would the other arcs go.

Well you had a great run, the memories in this fanfic for me was probably the best one as it was one of the earliest fanfics I've read in general especially from one of my favourite ships in this series. But still I can't help but wonder at this chapter being the end of the beginning for the fanfic as a while and I wonder how would the other arcs go.
1/23/2021 c29 Shiranai Atsune
Hooray for the summary! Thank you for giving us closure! I look forward to the rest!
Hooray for the summary! Thank you for giving us closure! I look forward to the rest!
1/11/2021 c2
13neko-alme
Idk why I suddenly got so emotional over Okuda's monologues. It's so pure, so heartwarming, so shoujo-esque like in the best way possible. Okuda and Karma's interactions are so natural and cute that my heart aches of fluff.

Idk why I suddenly got so emotional over Okuda's monologues. It's so pure, so heartwarming, so shoujo-esque like in the best way possible. Okuda and Karma's interactions are so natural and cute that my heart aches of fluff.
1/11/2021 c1 Guest
Thank you very much for updating. This is my favorite fanfic ever of karmanami so I've been waiting for so long for the next chapters that's why it really made me happy. I really really love this! Thank you very much!
Thank you very much for updating. This is my favorite fanfic ever of karmanami so I've been waiting for so long for the next chapters that's why it really made me happy. I really really love this! Thank you very much!
12/24/2020 c2 Guest
Hmmm... While to me Karma is a bit OOC but this is still a good one.
Hmmm... While to me Karma is a bit OOC but this is still a good one.
12/23/2020 c28 Guest
I’ve really liked the story and I would love to know what happens next.
I’ve really liked the story and I would love to know what happens next.
12/14/2020 c28
13Akatsuki-Metal
I would love to see how the story ends. It sounds like a good idea to me.

I would love to see how the story ends. It sounds like a good idea to me.
12/11/2020 c28 Meg
Hello! I just adore your story and couldn’t believe when I saw it was a 5 year work in progress! Bless you for how you support your work and treat your readers. With kindness I would LIVE to see the plans ️
Hello! I just adore your story and couldn’t believe when I saw it was a 5 year work in progress! Bless you for how you support your work and treat your readers. With kindness I would LIVE to see the plans ️
12/4/2020 c1 ZeroDriver
So how does Mikami Erina know that Okuda tried to kill her teacher Koro-Sensei. That makes no sense.
That wasn't public knowledge. Only Class 3-E, the Principal and the Government knew about it. Even the rest of students who were in the same school as Okuda knew absolutely nothing about what she was doing.
And yeah sure the Government mentioned the octopus in canon for whatever reason. But they said nothing about the students of 3-E trying to kill their teacher.
So that's a massive plot hole in your story from the first chapter onwards.
And honestly it ruins your story.
Its hard to get immersed in the story of your fanfic. When there is gaping plot holes in your fanfic.
So how does Mikami Erina know that Okuda tried to kill her teacher Koro-Sensei. That makes no sense.
That wasn't public knowledge. Only Class 3-E, the Principal and the Government knew about it. Even the rest of students who were in the same school as Okuda knew absolutely nothing about what she was doing.
And yeah sure the Government mentioned the octopus in canon for whatever reason. But they said nothing about the students of 3-E trying to kill their teacher.
So that's a massive plot hole in your story from the first chapter onwards.
And honestly it ruins your story.
Its hard to get immersed in the story of your fanfic. When there is gaping plot holes in your fanfic.
12/3/2020 c28
49Shiranai Atsune
Oooooohhh that's great! An outline would at least give us some closure! :D

Oooooohhh that's great! An outline would at least give us some closure! :D
11/28/2020 c28
8Snickering Fox
*sobbing* uwaaaaaaaaa
it's finally a goodbye, huh...?
this is the first fic of AC that I really like, with these ships that I loves dearly
reading this again invoked that nostalgic feelings of my teenage past, when I reading all shoujo mangas my hands could get, ah, how nostalgic... yes. reading this really like that too.
I'm sad because this fic couldn't get to that finish line, but I knew how that feeling like. it's not like i don't have fics that i kind of buried into the ground bc I'm not the Me that began those fics years ago...
ah, you migrated, then? then could you grant me a favor? well, it's only my wish, so it's up to you. Can you migrated this to ao3, with the rest of the outlined plot...?
Well, if you don't want, then I will in favor for the rest of outlines plot to be posted tho! (_ _)

*sobbing* uwaaaaaaaaa
it's finally a goodbye, huh...?
this is the first fic of AC that I really like, with these ships that I loves dearly
reading this again invoked that nostalgic feelings of my teenage past, when I reading all shoujo mangas my hands could get, ah, how nostalgic... yes. reading this really like that too.
I'm sad because this fic couldn't get to that finish line, but I knew how that feeling like. it's not like i don't have fics that i kind of buried into the ground bc I'm not the Me that began those fics years ago...
ah, you migrated, then? then could you grant me a favor? well, it's only my wish, so it's up to you. Can you migrated this to ao3, with the rest of the outlined plot...?
Well, if you don't want, then I will in favor for the rest of outlines plot to be posted tho! (_ _)
11/28/2020 c28
9Neemarishima
Oh my. I did see the update date right and I was glad you were back to post something. I remember this story is one of those that makes Ansatsu fandom so enjoyable to be around. Everytime I remember a Karma and Manami moment, it would be from this story especially in which Karma realizes his feelings for her. Your writing is incredible, the one that I would love to come back to see how writing emotions should be. It has lots of original characters yet also character buildings and that's saying something for a fanfiction.
I didn't realize it's been 5 years since this story first published but when you mention that you were 15 when you started this... Wow. It amazed me. I didn't remember anything about your real life but it still gives me chill when I remember how this story made me feel back then. You are amazing in writing this and I'm glad I found it. When I found out that you won't continue this, I was upset but hey it's normal in fanfiction world because real life is always important. Yet still, if you offer something like this, I won't decline. I would love to see how it ends.
And, I'm glad to hear you feel well now. They say dark times will bring anything brighter later and I believe that's true especially for times like this.
Thank you so much for your consideration. And yes, target on! (how I miss this punchline!). Hope you do well in real life.

Oh my. I did see the update date right and I was glad you were back to post something. I remember this story is one of those that makes Ansatsu fandom so enjoyable to be around. Everytime I remember a Karma and Manami moment, it would be from this story especially in which Karma realizes his feelings for her. Your writing is incredible, the one that I would love to come back to see how writing emotions should be. It has lots of original characters yet also character buildings and that's saying something for a fanfiction.
I didn't realize it's been 5 years since this story first published but when you mention that you were 15 when you started this... Wow. It amazed me. I didn't remember anything about your real life but it still gives me chill when I remember how this story made me feel back then. You are amazing in writing this and I'm glad I found it. When I found out that you won't continue this, I was upset but hey it's normal in fanfiction world because real life is always important. Yet still, if you offer something like this, I won't decline. I would love to see how it ends.
And, I'm glad to hear you feel well now. They say dark times will bring anything brighter later and I believe that's true especially for times like this.
Thank you so much for your consideration. And yes, target on! (how I miss this punchline!). Hope you do well in real life.