for Delusions5/20/2015 c2 Guest
This is so good! Update soon :)
This is so good! Update soon :)
5/3/2015 c1 
4quantumCellist
AAAAAAAAAAAAAA this is so good. It's almost painful to read, but it's so good.
One thing though: the formatting with the parentheses is a little odd. Maybe use italics? Also, Legillimency is the branch of magic associated with looking at others thoughts, not Occlumency. Occlumency is the branch associated with projecting one's own. (Wow I guess that was two things whoops)
~Cello Dragon
4quantumCellistAAAAAAAAAAAAAA this is so good. It's almost painful to read, but it's so good.
One thing though: the formatting with the parentheses is a little odd. Maybe use italics? Also, Legillimency is the branch of magic associated with looking at others thoughts, not Occlumency. Occlumency is the branch associated with projecting one's own. (Wow I guess that was two things whoops)
~Cello Dragon