
3/28/2020 c1 RwbyZillaPrime20
Are you going to make more chapters? Because I want to read more! Thank you!
Are you going to make more chapters? Because I want to read more! Thank you!
5/23/2015 c1
5kalakauai
Now that I think of it, I don't really think Tiz needs hands-on training, not with all the Asterisks he'll acquire in the long run...
Also, why is Ruby in the world of Luxendarc? How did she get there in the first place?

Now that I think of it, I don't really think Tiz needs hands-on training, not with all the Asterisks he'll acquire in the long run...
Also, why is Ruby in the world of Luxendarc? How did she get there in the first place?
5/17/2015 c1 Ragna
it's all good, this might have the greatest potential, keep up the good work
it's all good, this might have the greatest potential, keep up the good work
5/4/2015 c1 FanOfFanFiction820
This is a good story so far. I just started getting back to playing Bravely Default and it's a great game.
This is a good story so far. I just started getting back to playing Bravely Default and it's a great game.