
7/21/2017 c20 xXxPhantomxXx
By the way, my review/comment on chapter 1 is meant for chapter 20. Oops!
By the way, my review/comment on chapter 1 is meant for chapter 20. Oops!
7/21/2017 c1 xXxPhantomxXx
I'm glad you provided a happy ending! It's about time they finally get to be happy and in love without interference. This is a good fanfic. I love and ship literally everybody with Allen, but this rekindled my adoration of Yullen. I recently read a fanfic where Kanda was the worst person ever. So I kind of hated him for a bit lol. Thanks for writing!
I'm glad you provided a happy ending! It's about time they finally get to be happy and in love without interference. This is a good fanfic. I love and ship literally everybody with Allen, but this rekindled my adoration of Yullen. I recently read a fanfic where Kanda was the worst person ever. So I kind of hated him for a bit lol. Thanks for writing!
7/21/2017 c19 xXxPhantomxXx
This is just too sad. They deserve happiness... Damn, I feel kind of depressed now.
This is just too sad. They deserve happiness... Damn, I feel kind of depressed now.
7/21/2017 c17 xXxPhantomxXx
I was so confused for a second. I also thought Narain was dead. And then I thought, 'oh shit is he an akuma?!' I'm glad they're so close. Allen needs someone to rely on, especially after being traumatized and away from Kanda for so long.
I was so confused for a second. I also thought Narain was dead. And then I thought, 'oh shit is he an akuma?!' I'm glad they're so close. Allen needs someone to rely on, especially after being traumatized and away from Kanda for so long.
7/21/2017 c14 xXxPhantomxXx
Damn it's like the world is trying to keep them apart... I hope Kanda leaves with Allen
Damn it's like the world is trying to keep them apart... I hope Kanda leaves with Allen
11/21/2016 c20 sherryfanfic1999
If I had to choose, the sad one was better and a little more logical. Even as a fanfic! I'm a little sad they never had the chance to get it on, but oh well. It never crossed my mind until it was already over. This ending was just too chessy! I like it though. No one reading is worried about mistakes. They finished reading it. Keep working at it. Please write more for us.
If I had to choose, the sad one was better and a little more logical. Even as a fanfic! I'm a little sad they never had the chance to get it on, but oh well. It never crossed my mind until it was already over. This ending was just too chessy! I like it though. No one reading is worried about mistakes. They finished reading it. Keep working at it. Please write more for us.
12/5/2015 c18 sherryfanfic1999
What important poll? Anything talking about Yullan is fine with me, but your awesome to me! This is your writings, this is you and what you think. I am open to that. Keep up with your work whenever you can. I will go back through and comment on the chapters if you would like me to. I don't mind giving my opinion on the chapters but I don't think I am up high enough on the food chain to judge ANYONE'S writings. I don't have any stories myself, just ideas. I envy you. Thank you for your stories. I shall be reading much much more in the future! Oh, if you write Yullan (Kanda/Allen only)
supernatural/beast/mpreg/angel-demon/vampire...ect I would love to read it! Thanks again.
What important poll? Anything talking about Yullan is fine with me, but your awesome to me! This is your writings, this is you and what you think. I am open to that. Keep up with your work whenever you can. I will go back through and comment on the chapters if you would like me to. I don't mind giving my opinion on the chapters but I don't think I am up high enough on the food chain to judge ANYONE'S writings. I don't have any stories myself, just ideas. I envy you. Thank you for your stories. I shall be reading much much more in the future! Oh, if you write Yullan (Kanda/Allen only)
supernatural/beast/mpreg/angel-demon/vampire...ect I would love to read it! Thanks again.
8/19/2015 c17
8DaughterofAbyss
I must admit that in the last three chapters your writing has improved quite a bit from where it began. Your story is going well and coming together more but it might need a bit more detail to glue the pieces together. Hoping for another update. (6u6)

I must admit that in the last three chapters your writing has improved quite a bit from where it began. Your story is going well and coming together more but it might need a bit more detail to glue the pieces together. Hoping for another update. (6u6)
7/31/2015 c3 animefreak221
OMG the way Kanda was so protective over Allen I loved itit was so adorable
OMG the way Kanda was so protective over Allen I loved itit was so adorable