
2/19/2020 c4 Guest
Oh. my. shucking. gosh. These are beautiful and heartbreaking. Newt's and Gally's KILLED ME. (Not literally, don't worry)
Oh. my. shucking. gosh. These are beautiful and heartbreaking. Newt's and Gally's KILLED ME. (Not literally, don't worry)
11/14/2017 c2
3NinjaJo
You're not the only one who thought Thomas acted like a big brother to Chuck, Death For One. I thought so too. And I was really sad that Thomas never fulfilled his promise to Chuck of finding his parents, and your poem really drives that sadness home. It's good, though, to be able to manipulate the reader's emotions like that, so no offense when I say your poem made me really sad all over again.
~NinjaJo :)

You're not the only one who thought Thomas acted like a big brother to Chuck, Death For One. I thought so too. And I was really sad that Thomas never fulfilled his promise to Chuck of finding his parents, and your poem really drives that sadness home. It's good, though, to be able to manipulate the reader's emotions like that, so no offense when I say your poem made me really sad all over again.
~NinjaJo :)
10/12/2017 c3 Noreen
I luved this one so much! So sad and the last line brought tears to my eyes... write on!
I luved this one so much! So sad and the last line brought tears to my eyes... write on!
11/4/2016 c1
1MagiHarrietPotter
Amazing! I actually got goosebumps from reading these. And I also really liked the way you explained Gally's side.

Amazing! I actually got goosebumps from reading these. And I also really liked the way you explained Gally's side.
1/17/2016 c4
6Alaskayoung89
Wow this is really good, I totally agree with the chuck and Thomas relationship. Well done :)

Wow this is really good, I totally agree with the chuck and Thomas relationship. Well done :)
10/22/2015 c2 zoe
Awsome story
Awsome story