for Whiskey Time Travel5/6 c6 
10svald
Well this was fun to read, even on a third re-read. Hope we'll see the next chapter soon, considering you said roughly a year ago that its almost finished lol. No pressure tho, if rather wait a bit longer for a well written chapter. Cheers
10svaldWell this was fun to read, even on a third re-read. Hope we'll see the next chapter soon, considering you said roughly a year ago that its almost finished lol. No pressure tho, if rather wait a bit longer for a well written chapter. Cheers
4/29 c1 2Nogard1218
Really hoping you return with more chapters. This story is extremely enjoyable and I was very sad to make it to the end
2Nogard1218Really hoping you return with more chapters. This story is extremely enjoyable and I was very sad to make it to the end
4/29 c6 Guest
This is excellent! I love the style and the story so far. I would love to find out what happens next! Thank you for writing :)
This is excellent! I love the style and the story so far. I would love to find out what happens next! Thank you for writing :)
3/13 c3 Killerpickle
Harrys abilities are kinda pathetic for someone who is meant to of been one of the best, most dangerous most powerful that europe can make.
Where is his esotoic knowledge his speed and skill that allows him to overwhelm all normal foes without even moving with just the wave of his wand.
Harry didnt fight in anyway that was incredible or to a level to be revered, he fought more like a slighlty trained individual. There was bkthjng special about wgat he did orbhow he fought, yeah he had the intelligence to move but he didnt leverage any ability with magic as well where just with just its flexibility makes it a potent tool but he only ysed it for the most basic applications and nkt jn any way that was clever or abusing the simplicity of such spells.
Now also the battle with Voldemort was just done weirdly it comes out of nowhere but also Voldemort woul never show his face or do an operation that public, his whole strategy for the war us to assasinate key players, he would only come onto the stage during major operations such as raiding powerful familys, breaching fortresses that sort of thing.
He would only come out like that.
Harrys abilities are kinda pathetic for someone who is meant to of been one of the best, most dangerous most powerful that europe can make.
Where is his esotoic knowledge his speed and skill that allows him to overwhelm all normal foes without even moving with just the wave of his wand.
Harry didnt fight in anyway that was incredible or to a level to be revered, he fought more like a slighlty trained individual. There was bkthjng special about wgat he did orbhow he fought, yeah he had the intelligence to move but he didnt leverage any ability with magic as well where just with just its flexibility makes it a potent tool but he only ysed it for the most basic applications and nkt jn any way that was clever or abusing the simplicity of such spells.
Now also the battle with Voldemort was just done weirdly it comes out of nowhere but also Voldemort woul never show his face or do an operation that public, his whole strategy for the war us to assasinate key players, he would only come onto the stage during major operations such as raiding powerful familys, breaching fortresses that sort of thing.
He would only come out like that.
3/13 c2 Killerpickle
Harrys abilities are kinda pathetic for someone who is meant to of been one of the best, most dangerous most powerful that europe can make.
Where is his esotoic knowledge his speed and skill that allows him to overwhelm all normal foes without even moving with just the wave of his wand.
Now also the battle with Voldemort was just done weirdly it comes out of nowhere but also Voldemort woul never show his face or do an operation that public, his whole strategy for the war us to assasinate key players, he would only come onto the stage during major operations such as raiding powerful familys, breaching fortresses that sort of thing.
He would only come out like that for something big, to make a statment.
In the lore Voldemort only became active in the field really near the end when practicaly had one and they could of just stormed the ministry of magic
Harrys abilities are kinda pathetic for someone who is meant to of been one of the best, most dangerous most powerful that europe can make.
Where is his esotoic knowledge his speed and skill that allows him to overwhelm all normal foes without even moving with just the wave of his wand.
Now also the battle with Voldemort was just done weirdly it comes out of nowhere but also Voldemort woul never show his face or do an operation that public, his whole strategy for the war us to assasinate key players, he would only come onto the stage during major operations such as raiding powerful familys, breaching fortresses that sort of thing.
He would only come out like that for something big, to make a statment.
In the lore Voldemort only became active in the field really near the end when practicaly had one and they could of just stormed the ministry of magic
3/10 c2 Guest
Absolutelyyyyyyy love this chap
Thank so mucccccchhhh mate!
Absolutelyyyyyyy love this chap
Thank so mucccccchhhh mate!
2/11 c6 Guest
Still here reading and hoping for more jaunting good fun
Still here reading and hoping for more jaunting good fun
2/10 c1 zaniarein247
Your story "Whiskey Time Travel" is a masterpiece waiting to be seen With its rich world compelling characters and gripping plot it deserves more than just words on a page it deserves to be visualized
As a commissioned base artist with 3 years of experience I specialize in transforming incredible narratives into stunning comics that captivate audiences Lets collaborate and turn your vision into breathtaking art that speaks to the world
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Lets create something unforgettable cant wait to hear from you
Your story "Whiskey Time Travel" is a masterpiece waiting to be seen With its rich world compelling characters and gripping plot it deserves more than just words on a page it deserves to be visualized
As a commissioned base artist with 3 years of experience I specialize in transforming incredible narratives into stunning comics that captivate audiences Lets collaborate and turn your vision into breathtaking art that speaks to the world
Want to see my work Just ask
Discord alimaggoon
Lets create something unforgettable cant wait to hear from you
1/4 c6 Guest
Pls post love this
Pls post love this