
1/25/2020 c3 Guest
The most depressing, pointless , annoying fic I’ve read , never understand why people write this shit where he dies , simply because you claim to love one piece , yet write this nonsense
The most depressing, pointless , annoying fic I’ve read , never understand why people write this shit where he dies , simply because you claim to love one piece , yet write this nonsense
1/25/2020 c2 Guest
What is there to review , you are killing him ,the end
What is there to review , you are killing him ,the end
5/6/2017 c3 Guest
Jolly D Rojee
Jolly D Rojee
8/28/2015 c3 JustAGuy
Fuck. You. For. Making. Me . Cry
Fuck. You. For. Making. Me . Cry
8/11/2015 c3
3AnimeAngel2692
God damn. I had to wait a minute before writing this, couldn't see the letters coz of the tears! That was really good.
I'm assuming the last sentence was in reference to Luffy being the reincarnation of Roger? Or the "other man" was roger.
I like to think luffy has Roger's "will". Even Raylih (spelling is wrong I think) said "that hat has never looked better on you, Roger." When talking about luffy. Mind boggling.
Anyway, great story, love it

God damn. I had to wait a minute before writing this, couldn't see the letters coz of the tears! That was really good.
I'm assuming the last sentence was in reference to Luffy being the reincarnation of Roger? Or the "other man" was roger.
I like to think luffy has Roger's "will". Even Raylih (spelling is wrong I think) said "that hat has never looked better on you, Roger." When talking about luffy. Mind boggling.
Anyway, great story, love it
8/6/2015 c2
1xgravity
Waaa ;-; you've brought up a good point, with the whole 'you will lose 10 years of your life' thing. I wonder if Oda will bring it up again in the future; I thought it was just to show Luffy's determination to save Ace, but knowing Oda it's entirely possible he has something planned.
Looking forward to the next update! Thanks for writing & sharing! :)

Waaa ;-; you've brought up a good point, with the whole 'you will lose 10 years of your life' thing. I wonder if Oda will bring it up again in the future; I thought it was just to show Luffy's determination to save Ace, but knowing Oda it's entirely possible he has something planned.
Looking forward to the next update! Thanks for writing & sharing! :)
8/6/2015 c2 MeganeD
Oh yeah,,I've been thinking about it too. that luffy would lost his ten years of living in the sake to heal. and I don't know how to react if something like this really going to happen. it just like luffy really didn't have many times to living. and then, you made this. never see that come. great.
but I wonder though, why was roger in the list? I understand if it's ace and the strawhats but for roger...I'm quite confused. I really want to know his relation with all of this! so please,, would you mind to continue? :)
Oh yeah,,I've been thinking about it too. that luffy would lost his ten years of living in the sake to heal. and I don't know how to react if something like this really going to happen. it just like luffy really didn't have many times to living. and then, you made this. never see that come. great.
but I wonder though, why was roger in the list? I understand if it's ace and the strawhats but for roger...I'm quite confused. I really want to know his relation with all of this! so please,, would you mind to continue? :)
8/5/2015 c2
3AnimeAngel2692
I like it, when I comment in the last chapter I didn't notice this one. It's good

I like it, when I comment in the last chapter I didn't notice this one. It's good
5/21/2015 c1 Guest
How come he isn't calling Law? Luffy views him as a friend and I am sure that Law too now. And I am sure that Luffy instinct would tell him if he died but does chopper or Law know it? He got a doctor to confirm his statement right?
How come he isn't calling Law? Luffy views him as a friend and I am sure that Law too now. And I am sure that Luffy instinct would tell him if he died but does chopper or Law know it? He got a doctor to confirm his statement right?