
11/14/2015 c1 IDC1314
This is great! :) hi, I'm idrawcartoons1314 on Instagram and I'm going to draw this story :):):)
This is great! :) hi, I'm idrawcartoons1314 on Instagram and I'm going to draw this story :):):)
11/11/2015 c1
5MissPineapples
Wow. Your skill in writing detailed fight scenes are incredible! I so jelly bro

Wow. Your skill in writing detailed fight scenes are incredible! I so jelly bro
9/2/2015 c1
1thewookie1
I'm impressed, even your first story wasn't bad. I like the subtle Starco, it really fits the character's age and personas.

I'm impressed, even your first story wasn't bad. I like the subtle Starco, it really fits the character's age and personas.
5/29/2015 c1 lol wat
Y did the fight seen take so long ? It was kinda annoying
Y did the fight seen take so long ? It was kinda annoying
5/14/2015 c1
9MiketheFandomMan
First of all, I LOVE your writing style. The subtle humor you added just made this fic all the more awesome. Second, less unused commas and more Starco

First of all, I LOVE your writing style. The subtle humor you added just made this fic all the more awesome. Second, less unused commas and more Starco
5/12/2015 c1 Guest
That was a good story. great work.
That was a good story. great work.
5/11/2015 c1
21H. Mae
I deeply respect the fact that u can write amazing combat scenes. Bravo with that! :D u did an amazing job. And the romance, adorable. Though I did want another kiss.

I deeply respect the fact that u can write amazing combat scenes. Bravo with that! :D u did an amazing job. And the romance, adorable. Though I did want another kiss.
5/9/2015 c1
50acosta perez jose ramiro
Hey, this is quite cool. Great battle scenes.
Keep the good writing.

Hey, this is quite cool. Great battle scenes.
Keep the good writing.
5/9/2015 c1 Guest
Good story I like the ending keep it up
Good story I like the ending keep it up
5/9/2015 c1 Guest
THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL QuQ
THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL QuQ
5/9/2015 c1 Norsk Unicorn
Oh my gosh this is perfect! Do you do karate? Because the way you wrote the fight scene made it seem like you have a fighting background. Which is awesome! You're a really good writer. Starco? Check. Fight scene? check. This is perfection!
Oh my gosh this is perfect! Do you do karate? Because the way you wrote the fight scene made it seem like you have a fighting background. Which is awesome! You're a really good writer. Starco? Check. Fight scene? check. This is perfection!