for Remembrance12/10/2015 c1 Anastacia
Good God, you're great. Sorry, I can read Spanish and understand it, but I could never write it as well as you do. This was unique. It was the most immersing writing I've seen in a while. Yes, continue writing. Don't ever stop.
Wonderful story line. You've gave him such wonderful dimensions and the way you constructed the events, up to the end of this chapter, well, left me totally gasping for air-in a good way. :)
Just loved it! I truly could not stop reading it.
Good God, you're great. Sorry, I can read Spanish and understand it, but I could never write it as well as you do. This was unique. It was the most immersing writing I've seen in a while. Yes, continue writing. Don't ever stop.
Wonderful story line. You've gave him such wonderful dimensions and the way you constructed the events, up to the end of this chapter, well, left me totally gasping for air-in a good way. :)
Just loved it! I truly could not stop reading it.
10/4/2015 c2 fernanda
Me parece muy buena tu historia, en gustaría leer mas, me gusta tu redacción, no podía dejar de leer
Me parece muy buena tu historia, en gustaría leer mas, me gusta tu redacción, no podía dejar de leer
5/12/2015 c1 
9phantom thr
Nada mal! Es muy parecido al tuyo no? Bueno de todas formas me encanto al igual que el tuyo
9phantom thrNada mal! Es muy parecido al tuyo no? Bueno de todas formas me encanto al igual que el tuyo