
6/3/2020 c6 Grace
You need to make it clearer I am having trouble understanding who says what
You need to make it clearer I am having trouble understanding who says what
2/28/2018 c18 Guest
Pmlj2khasdklhidsaj l gaha le o que, malo
Tpi
Pmlj2khasdklhidsaj l gaha le o que, malo
Tpi
1/29/2016 c17 Guest
Please continue writing this fan fiction it is awesome.
Please continue writing this fan fiction it is awesome.
8/15/2015 c3
8ZoeSummerStarr
Hi, i seem interested in this story but the words in the story are giving me a headache as im all confuse on the direction its going. May try to edit the chapters and dont go all different direction. I cant read on from this chapter im reviewing. Please fix it. Thanks

Hi, i seem interested in this story but the words in the story are giving me a headache as im all confuse on the direction its going. May try to edit the chapters and dont go all different direction. I cant read on from this chapter im reviewing. Please fix it. Thanks
6/22/2015 c4 mslulu55
Its really good but you have some spelling errors and it could be a bit longer,per chapter I mean
Its really good but you have some spelling errors and it could be a bit longer,per chapter I mean
5/26/2015 c14 Guest
Aw he slapped her butt
Aw they snuggled
Aw he slapped her butt
Aw they snuggled
5/18/2015 c9 Guest
Some affectionate romantic booty slaps
Some affectionate romantic booty slaps
5/10/2015 c4 Guest
love Sky and Bloom
love Sky and Bloom