
1/19/2003 c9 Guest
This is really good! I LOVE it!
This is really good! I LOVE it!
1/19/2003 c8
13Table-chan
Ahhh...Kawaii! I'm a romantic, so i love this chapter^_^ hope to see more soon
KK

Ahhh...Kawaii! I'm a romantic, so i love this chapter^_^ hope to see more soon
KK
1/18/2003 c8
3PhoenixLady8
Great! I love reading this! But what happened to Kid and Serge? Ya're kinda missin' 'em. Ihire

Great! I love reading this! But what happened to Kid and Serge? Ya're kinda missin' 'em. Ihire
1/18/2003 c8 Guest
YEA! What a great chapter keep going!
YEA! What a great chapter keep going!
1/16/2003 c7 PhoenixLady8
Hi! I'll like to read more, so please up date soon. What's that whitish thing? Serge, Kid, and Leo? What'll be interesting is if Serge was a Dragon Rider!^^ Ihire
Hi! I'll like to read more, so please up date soon. What's that whitish thing? Serge, Kid, and Leo? What'll be interesting is if Serge was a Dragon Rider!^^ Ihire
1/16/2003 c7 Random Viewer
It keeps getting better and better don't stop!
It keeps getting better and better don't stop!
1/13/2003 c3 Guest
WOW! This is great! Please don't stop!
WOW! This is great! Please don't stop!
1/10/2003 c6 aegis
I'm reading, I'm reading! Please don't stop the story. I hate when people do that right at the good part.
I'm reading, I'm reading! Please don't stop the story. I hate when people do that right at the good part.
1/10/2003 c6 Guest
I Like it. Keep it up.
I Like it. Keep it up.
1/9/2003 c5 PhoenixLady8
No, I don't know Glenn's real name, but I really like this story and would like to read more. Ihire
No, I don't know Glenn's real name, but I really like this story and would like to read more. Ihire
12/19/2002 c2 Random Person
Nope. It's Wazuki.
Good story though. I'm very curious about this Locke fellow.
Nope. It's Wazuki.
Good story though. I'm very curious about this Locke fellow.
12/15/2002 c1 some guy1
heh.
yea, i thought of locke from ff3, thanks for explaining its not him at the end.
heh.
yea, i thought of locke from ff3, thanks for explaining its not him at the end.
12/15/2002 c1
1Otome no Suteki
A very nice start. I'm partial to the fact that you kept the characters in check with their real persona, not to mention smart conversations as well. I'm eager to read Chapter 2.

A very nice start. I'm partial to the fact that you kept the characters in check with their real persona, not to mention smart conversations as well. I'm eager to read Chapter 2.