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6/3/2015 c1 3Cat Girl 1995
great start! love the chapter can't wait for more! oh and happy birthday!
6/2/2015 c1 4SanctuaryInMusic
Ooh, I like this. It was a very intriguing start to your story, and Jack's a Light on the Globe! I adore that headcanon so much (have I used that one yet? I forget), and what will be the other Guardians' reactions upon seeing that the fading belief was from their baby, their little brother?

But I hate Will O'Wisp with a burning passion (no pun intended). He's such a jerk, and is there a reason for such an awful reaction to Jack's Guardianship? What could've Jack done wrong to insult or hurt Will? And what about Pitch's evil schemes? (But at least Will cared for the animals. I guess he gets brownie points for that. But it still doesn't justify how cruel he was!)

And I think that you've kept them all in character. Poor Jack, don't you know that the Guardians DO care? They'd never abandon you. Oh, and Jack, stay strong! The Guardians are coming, don't you worry!

Can't wait for the next update, and happy early birthday! :D And thanks for the luck—I'm having my last final tomorrow. :)
5/12/2015 c1 32Free.Spirit140
This looks so good!
5/10/2015 c1 Guest
U must continue
5/10/2015 c1 9Jewelie-chan
This is so awesome! Keep it up Mysteryfan!
5/10/2015 c1 Guest
Please continueeee;*
5/9/2015 c1 fluffybunny01
I'm not going to embarrass myself saying what I did when the chapter was over.
Anyway I liked it
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