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3/17/2016 c1 1410-phoenix-feathers
I like this story. I would just maybe add in a few more commas, and comb over the punctuation a tad. But other than that, it was really lovely! I loved how father-like Mr Tumnus was, and how they bothed missed their mothers. And the merpeople! Thankyou for putting them in; they are so often overlooked.
7/8/2015 c1 21Psycho Tangerine
I would love to see him open that gift and then have a tantrum because it's not the newest i-phone...even though he'd have no clue what that is.
5/10/2015 c1 2NarnianFairy
This is real cute! Loved it!

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