for The Water Saint4/2/2020 c9 Neroquin
I don't think we have the same definition of 'a few weeks'. I don't like when people promise but then don't actually do it. Don't promise things you won't do.
Other than that, nice story! I really enjoyed reading. I'm going to check your account for other stories.
I don't think we have the same definition of 'a few weeks'. I don't like when people promise but then don't actually do it. Don't promise things you won't do.
Other than that, nice story! I really enjoyed reading. I'm going to check your account for other stories.
6/23/2019 c9 
1txenpai
Good story, and thank GOD for no pairings. I always feel like pairings (unless they're canon) sometimes ruin the plot.
Please update!
1txenpaiGood story, and thank GOD for no pairings. I always feel like pairings (unless they're canon) sometimes ruin the plot.
Please update!
3/1/2019 c4 Guest
It’s nice chapter!
Please pair Erza with Tobirama! They will make a nice couple! Yeah late, Erza will fall in love with Tobirama and she will go with him to Konoha and make some cute children!
It’s nice chapter!
Please pair Erza with Tobirama! They will make a nice couple! Yeah late, Erza will fall in love with Tobirama and she will go with him to Konoha and make some cute children!
1/16/2018 c9 Guest
A few weeks. Right.
Love the plot! Please continue! Thx
A few weeks. Right.
Love the plot! Please continue! Thx
6/30/2017 c4 1trex0428
Well their fucking rude for ignoring tobirama like that and why does jellal act like that i mean does he even realise that hes getting punch by tobirama and not natsu and they didnt give tobirama enough even in the narutoverse he created a lot of jutsu and doesnt get praise like hashirama
1trex0428Well their fucking rude for ignoring tobirama like that and why does jellal act like that i mean does he even realise that hes getting punch by tobirama and not natsu and they didnt give tobirama enough even in the narutoverse he created a lot of jutsu and doesnt get praise like hashirama
6/30/2017 c2 trex0428
Now tobirama nows how it feels to be the one being boss around instead him bossing them
Now tobirama nows how it feels to be the one being boss around instead him bossing them
3/2/2016 c9 2angelvan105
Thank you for telling me! Have fun of your other written work! I wishes you best of luck!
2angelvan105Thank you for telling me! Have fun of your other written work! I wishes you best of luck!
3/1/2016 c3 22On Soaring Wings
You need to work on your pacing. Events seem to move so fast I'm getting mental whiplash.
22On Soaring WingsYou need to work on your pacing. Events seem to move so fast I'm getting mental whiplash.
2/27/2016 c8 2angelvan105
What another great updated chapter! It was always great to see Tobirama involved in every action as possible! Way to go! Thank you!
2angelvan105What another great updated chapter! It was always great to see Tobirama involved in every action as possible! Way to go! Thank you!
2/23/2016 c1 1EVA-Saiyajin
Very simplistic writing, no build up at all, no real emotion or drama.
I'd recommend starting over.
1EVA-SaiyajinVery simplistic writing, no build up at all, no real emotion or drama.
I'd recommend starting over.
2/22/2016 c7 6madaraaaaaaa
Just want to tell everyone, the next chapter should be out on Wednesday in case your wondering.
6madaraaaaaaaJust want to tell everyone, the next chapter should be out on Wednesday in case your wondering.