for Crooked Pathways7/18/2015 c2 
8mysterygirlanonymous
It is an improvement in length :) sorry for reviewing so late, anyways the sorry is going so well. I'm so curious to know what, why, and who they are working for.
8mysterygirlanonymousIt is an improvement in length :) sorry for reviewing so late, anyways the sorry is going so well. I'm so curious to know what, why, and who they are working for.
6/19/2015 c1 24Nispedana
The story has Interesting start!
I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
keep writing, my friend!
24NispedanaThe story has Interesting start!
I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
keep writing, my friend!
6/12/2015 c1 8mysterygirlanonymous
Ooh a CroMa story! - Hope you can continue. There were a few mistakes but other than that, that's it. Oh and please make it a bit longer :). Good luck :D
8mysterygirlanonymousOoh a CroMa story! - Hope you can continue. There were a few mistakes but other than that, that's it. Oh and please make it a bit longer :). Good luck :D