for Rose the Death Eater6/24/2020 c11 Crookshanks
Oh wow! This story I think is quite original and well-written! Please update soon!
Oh wow! This story I think is quite original and well-written! Please update soon!
8/27/2017 c1 Large Hands Hans
This was great. I will come back and read the rest later. Keep up the good work because you are incredible
This was great. I will come back and read the rest later. Keep up the good work because you are incredible
8/27/2017 c7 Guest
This is good. I almost didn't read it looking at the number of views,but I'm glad I did.
Keep going
This is good. I almost didn't read it looking at the number of views,but I'm glad I did.
Keep going
6/11/2016 c6 
20Brookie Twiling
I'm really diggin' this story. At first I wasn't sure about the whole one-shot thing but it really works- might try it myself sometime. Anyway, great concept and is just what I've been looking for so thank you. Please update soon!
20Brookie TwilingI'm really diggin' this story. At first I wasn't sure about the whole one-shot thing but it really works- might try it myself sometime. Anyway, great concept and is just what I've been looking for so thank you. Please update soon!
6/11/2016 c6 8Tremendously Sassy
Hey!
I love your take on HP!
I really like your OC, you characer is almost certainly not a Mary Sue. The plot sounds appealing, but the courtscene was a bit revealing. You know she's going to join the death eaters, but still, I'm here to read about how she ended up there, right? I love your way of writing, it's inspiring. And please, don't make it into a story where Rose ends up as a finialist for the tournament, that's just... no. When snape asked her what her plans where for the summer, I was like. What if she hadn't had any plans? Would he suggest for her to come over?! I literally slapped my forehead of the idea that Snape calls her Ms Evans, which he prefers obviously. They were going into that situation.. I knew it. He sees her as Lily, obviously. But there's one thing, Rose is a Slytherin for a reason, cause she ísn't Gryffindor material which Lily was. But from features, you could say they looked the same right? It's cute that she's younger, because I don't like story's whereas Harry has an older sister/brother. I secretly ship Rose/Draco, but to think that his future wife was sitting next to Rose is kinda weird. You'd have to think about that? Although, every character changes a story, wether they're are in it or not. I love Luna! She's just... yeah she's Luna. Those are likely my favorite characters. I hope you'll update soon so I'll be reading more of this!
Love,
Lisa
8Tremendously SassyHey!
I love your take on HP!
I really like your OC, you characer is almost certainly not a Mary Sue. The plot sounds appealing, but the courtscene was a bit revealing. You know she's going to join the death eaters, but still, I'm here to read about how she ended up there, right? I love your way of writing, it's inspiring. And please, don't make it into a story where Rose ends up as a finialist for the tournament, that's just... no. When snape asked her what her plans where for the summer, I was like. What if she hadn't had any plans? Would he suggest for her to come over?! I literally slapped my forehead of the idea that Snape calls her Ms Evans, which he prefers obviously. They were going into that situation.. I knew it. He sees her as Lily, obviously. But there's one thing, Rose is a Slytherin for a reason, cause she ísn't Gryffindor material which Lily was. But from features, you could say they looked the same right? It's cute that she's younger, because I don't like story's whereas Harry has an older sister/brother. I secretly ship Rose/Draco, but to think that his future wife was sitting next to Rose is kinda weird. You'd have to think about that? Although, every character changes a story, wether they're are in it or not. I love Luna! She's just... yeah she's Luna. Those are likely my favorite characters. I hope you'll update soon so I'll be reading more of this!
Love,
Lisa
5/12/2015 c2 bartholemew
Dude/dudette, totally continue! This is pretty cool. I want to know what she does
Dude/dudette, totally continue! This is pretty cool. I want to know what she does