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9/27/2015 c3 2Korog the Oversoul
Okay I just went through all 3 chapters, and I think you should take them make them a single chapter, give 3 a less 'just hanging around' feeling ending, then post. It's good but needs more...everything,
6/3/2015 c3 dadman9994
looking ford to see what you do with this :)

good job
dadman9994
5/17/2015 c2 dadman9994
dude like i said before this is a cool story line cant wait for the next part :)
5/17/2015 c2 1Currahee506
It's a bit short
5/17/2015 c2 1Firestar Prime
Cool can't wait for the next chapter of this story.
5/13/2015 c1 Guest
So whose all in the harem?
5/13/2015 c1 dadman9994
dude this sounds cool cant wait till i see what you will do with this story line :)

good job :)
dadman9994
5/12/2015 c1 BANKAIZEN
interesing
5/12/2015 c1 1Currahee506
More please

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