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5/14 c64 Crimson Hawk Wolf
After reading this whole story again i find myself wishing there was more chapters to go here. Dam this is a good story.

I do wonder how Himawari got the dragon contract though. All i can think of is at some point Naruto signs the dragon contract in the time line she came from. If thats so does Naruto still sign it in the current timeline or is he going with a different summoning contract now. Dam i wish i knew that in the story since i keep wondering what routes everyone will at some point take with summoning.

I am also looking forward to everything blowing up in Sasuke’s faces as well like everything by else does. I wonder if he actually comes a threat at all in the story. Dam what a pain that kid is. I called him kid because he seems to be acting like a spoiled rotten little brat that always needs to get his way and throws a fit when he doesn’t.

I hope when the time feels right for you to do so there can be more chapters added here. I will be looking forward to the day when more chapters can be enjoyed and seeing how everything turns out for those involved.

Thanks a bunch for all the great stories you have done so far. There all fun to look back on and enjoy reading again.
4/28 c3 Crimson Hawk Wolf
Sorry to be a bother here but if Hinata and Hanabi are five years apart and Hinata is i believe fifteen or sixteen in this story now then shouldn’t Hanabi be maybe ten or eleven right now instead of seven?

Im just trying to understand if this is anime age range or if its not since i am lost right now. I am ok if there is an eight or nine year difference in this story. Just had to ask is all because Hinata and her class are the age they were in the Shippuden series while still in the academy.
3/4 c35 kratos264
Its such a turn off that you gave the supposedly already strongest genin the random ass pull of mokuton there was already like no tension in the story at all now its even worse
3/4 c12 kratos264
Why are all the characters just becoming the same person? Naruto has interesting compelling characters now youve turned them all into mean spirited bad asses but that seems like that is quite literally all they are. I get theyd take after their teacher but now you have like 6 important characters that are just copies of hanako with a different skill set
2/14 c64 MrMid
This story is really good, honestly this story was my intro to Tenjho Tenge, would love to see the opposite with Naruto and co in their world.
1/20 c64 Rodrigo25
gostei muito
1/8 c64 HurZysn
thank you for the update blue. I look forward to the next
1/7 c5 Zai31
You decided to change the ages for V2, so there should have been so many changes made like how Naruto keeps getting called midget even though 16 yr old Naruto should be normal height or how you've not changed his maturity at all so it just doesn't work properly anymore. Why is he crying so much? He's being trained to kill. He should have some emotional control and composure.
1/7 c64 Power Taco
I followed the story for a while and enjoyed it, but this is where I'll prob stop. The choice to send Himawari from the future means most of the tension is gone for me. Here potential bad thing that did or might happen, but thankfully she knows about it and now the problem can be bypassed. No real room for growth.

In addition Naruto deciding that Mas deserved the death glare just for existing is pretty lame since he's a generally decent guy, and gets shit on enough in his own show. Add to the fact that Naruto is just instantly in dad mode despite being a child himself, and it's...a parody? Idk how to describe it.

I loved the start, and even the basically oc anbu but Himawari killed it for me. I do wish you good luck though in the future on the story.
1/7 c64 Habu2010
Please continue, I wonder if Mikoto has a love interest with Naruto.
1/7 c64 Obsidian Dreamweaver
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1/7 c64 101VFSNAKE
And the game is a foot. it's like Oceans 11. Sort of.
1/7 c64 23thermalsnipern7
Naruto stealing back his own money is going to be quite the show.
1/7 c64 1REVANOFSITHLORD
Lol happy new year. thank you for update
1/7 c64 Crimson Hawk Wolf
I like how you had things in this chapter turn out the way it did. I was also wondering when Anko and Bunshichi would show up since Himawari came around. I wonder why they were in Tea Country for though. I also wonder when the wedding date for Anko and Bunshichi will be now with that info drop. Nicely done with that shocker lol.

When i read the chapter title fireworks i was thinking that everything was going to happen in this chapter with stealing the money but now i see it was the planning phase and other important things being done and getting set up.

I can understand where Himawari is coming from with needing to keep quiet about the future but i also don’t fully understand the reason to do so when its something thats going to happen anyways even if she wasn’t involved. Dam thats a headache to deal with. Poor kid.

Add whatever curses you want. Here i was thinking good old one nut duck butt head wound up dead being useless to the snake creep. I wonder how long that pain in the ass is going to be around for before he gets put down for good. I also wonder how he will feel to find his mother was cloned back to life and more or less the same age as him but only has the memory from that age and and the new memory since being alive.

Does sasuke even find out about his cloned mother to begin with? I have no issues at all waiting to find the answer in the the later chapters unless you want to PM me that answer. Your call.

I have been hoping you might add chapter titles to each one at some point. This is a really great story that i tend to enjoy rereading from time to time. I was always worried i might be rude if i asked about chapter titles being added to remember things better so i never asked. Sorry for not doing so.

Thank you for the update to this story and i am looking forward to reading what happens next. I wonder how everything will turn out for those involved and what kind of chaos might unfold as well.

I hope your year has been able to have a good start to it for you and those love and care about so far. I wish you the best of luck with whatever happens in life.
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