
5/17/2015 c8 Lala Norisu
Awesome and Bruce chapter, very nice fanfic too. Please make more chapter soon
Awesome and Bruce chapter, very nice fanfic too. Please make more chapter soon
5/16/2015 c7 Lala Norisu
I really love the randy hair and awesome chapter .please make more chapter soon
I really love the randy hair and awesome chapter .please make more chapter soon
5/13/2015 c3 Lala Norisu
Poor ninja andi hope he get better soon, I want to know what happene next . Please make more chapter when u can ok . :)
Poor ninja andi hope he get better soon, I want to know what happene next . Please make more chapter when u can ok . :)
5/13/2015 c2
1GreatestSoldier
Wow, the darkness in Randy reminded me of my stories. This is ok at best but you need to make longer chapters and more space between lines. Sorta like how my stories are right now. Other than that, good grammar and it's ok if you don't know the teachers names. I didn't and I somehow got away with it. :) Anyway, good luck. Signed-GreatestSoldier

Wow, the darkness in Randy reminded me of my stories. This is ok at best but you need to make longer chapters and more space between lines. Sorta like how my stories are right now. Other than that, good grammar and it's ok if you don't know the teachers names. I didn't and I somehow got away with it. :) Anyway, good luck. Signed-GreatestSoldier
5/13/2015 c2 Lala Norisu
I like thing nomicon said and chapter was Bruce . Please update more chapter soon.
I like thing nomicon said and chapter was Bruce . Please update more chapter soon.