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9/8/2016 c21 txchimama
Man,you are an awesome writer! I loved this story! Poor Ali! I know he was so frantic when he couldn't find her!
9/17/2015 c21 Augustus Featherwing
Another chapter of the tale down. I'm starting to get nervous.

If memory serves, Stroud (Ser Stroud) was Warden-Constable or Senior Warden of the Free March City of Ansburg (the Grey Warden bastion in the city). Possibly Warden-Constable of the Free Marches given that he is encountered in Kirkwall as well. I'm not sure his title would be Warden Commander, as you stated above. I think it is reasonable to assume that Clarel has already assumed the title by this time.

As discovered in Legacy, Larius was once Warden Commander before the taint claimed him, and it was also possible that Stroud followed him as his successor. Clarel was Warden Commander for Orlais, and we've never heard anything about the Order in Nevarra or Antiva (since The Last Flight) or any other branches of the Order beyond the Anderfels.
9/17/2015 c7 Augustus Featherwing
Hi there!

Thought I'd poke you with the correct spellings of the Fraternities:

Libertarian(s) (Fiona, Uldred, Adrian)
Aequitarian(s) (Wynne, Irving, Rhys)

The Dragon Age Wiki ( ) has more information on them.
Anyhow, I've really enjoyed reading your work. It's been a fun passtime.

~AF
9/12/2015 c1 4Onitsu Blackfeather
You know, I thought about that too. The whole timeline thing. The 5th blight ends in a year, with how sea travel is in the mideval eras it would have taken hawke a month or so to try and cross the walking sea to Kirkwall, after that we don't know how long it took for him to really get into the city. They could have been waiting a week for Galmlen to come meet them. And even then Hawke had to work for a year with the smugglers or mercinaries. Then when he met up with Varric it took some time before you got the quest to find Anders. So it's totally plausible that the crap that happens in Awakening finished, and Anders gtfo and ran to Kirkwall ad soon as the Warden commander left Amaranthine. Gering up 50 sovs wasn't that easy when jobs paid maybe a silver here and a copper there AND you were trying to keep supplied with enough potions no one died. And if you remember, when you get the quest to find Anders you find out that he hasn't really been there all that long.
7/30/2015 c21 Dforce76
I'm sorry it took me so long read this. I've been on vacation in Scotland. It's beautiful, but lacks in internet speed. I love your transition. Thanks for such a fun story. I can't wait to read Days of Our Past.
7/11/2015 c21 White Story
I don't understand, why Anders leaving will make her wondering if anybody cares about her?
I mean she knew it can happen and it doesn't seem related to each other.

And Hawke, Bethaney AND Carver, Varric and Merill?
Doesn't one of hawke relatives dies every time?
Is this Halo's attempt to not spoil who died for Nia?
Why doesn't she sail to Kirkwall instead for using Halo's power?

So many questions.

Btw, poor Alistair, Nia falling down a hole and disappearing gonna make him wonder if she isn't in the Maker's bosom.
7/10/2015 c21 1MariaPerkyBat
And so it is done... not! Haha! Loves it, Lee! Can't wait for DA II!
7/9/2015 c20 White Story
Sigrud dead, huh?
Well she wasn't really important anyway.

And we are finally gonna see what Nia gonna do with the whole Anders - Justice thing in DA2!
Can't wait!
7/7/2015 c20 GamerGeekGirl
I think it's been a while since I said Thx for writing ur awesome stories and I love you! And Thx for replying and getting in touch with ur viewers and not just ignoring them like other ppl I know and keep up the great work! Xxx

P.s I loved this chapter Cuz it made me laugh,cry,be happy and that's what every good story needs! Xxxx luv ya
7/7/2015 c20 2Chimera Spyke
Sigrun's death weighs heavy here. You can feel it in the tone, I had hoped for a timely rescue but fate is fickle.

Nia is trying to do anything to stave off the inevitable or at least try and change the outcome slightly. Admirable, but destiny more often times finds you on the path you take to avoid it. How will Anders cause the Mage rebellion now? Will he fuse with Justice now that he sees the consequences of doing so in Nia? Will Hawk let him live?

Oddly enough, you and my game master from the Dragon Age table top game would get along well. You can both spin a pretty good yarn.
7/7/2015 c20 ThelonewolfNT
I always liked the Architect, his goal noble to free his people. hsi methods not the best...but no ones perfect.
I also think the architect was a magister because there was five of them. Great story my friend again.
7/7/2015 c20 EG
Great update and I can't wait for Nia to get to DA2!
7/7/2015 c20 Buggy300
One more chapter then transition. AHHHH! Excitement.

The wrap up and scarring was interesting. It was kind of a depressing chapter but giving the perhaps Pyrrhic Victory last chapter it is understandable.

Again on Sigrun's death I think it was fine and well done. You even kind of payed homage to the one epilogue in Awakening where she does die. It makes Sigrun out to have had a change where unlike when you find her she doesn't run away from battle and certain death. That is what you did with her basically buying time and then triggering the change in Nia. So I feel that well it was sad it easily fits into the theme and precedents set by the game.

As a side note about epilogues Origins and Awakening had the best epilogues. DA2 was the worst epilogue ever. Inquisition could have done better especially considering all the little side-quests you ran in that game. So not sure if it was intended but I like how when you picked someone to die it was already established as a possibility in the game.

I also remember you made a note of how Inquisition had nothing to do with Amaranthine, and was wondering if you would bring mentions of the Silver Knights and Sir Alec from the epilogue? If it does not happen that is fine but in my opinion that was wasted potential in Inquisition.
7/7/2015 c20 1MariaPerkyBat
Sigh. The end of another of my favorite stories is near. But, I will remain strong for... INQUISITORIAL WORSHIPER NIA! Yayyyyy! Can't wait! :-) On another note, like my new username?
7/5/2015 c19 EG
Whoops...didn't read the beginning of the chapter author note...
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