
5/23/2015 c2
20Mike AZ 2
These two chapters were actually kind of funny, this is pretty good so far. Out of curiosity though, does this take place before Fire Emblem: Awakening or during?
If the latter, I also wonder why Frederick and Robin/Avatar aren't in it, though I guess Frederick could've been elsewhere I imagine. Unless it was before Awakening, so Robin and Virion wouldn't have joined up with the Shepherds, yet. I'm sorry if this sounded like taking it too seriously, I was just curious.
Also, would've liked to know Robin and Frederick's reactions to the incident with drunken Sumia and Lissa's prank, but its your story. Its still a good one. Looking forward to next chapter.

These two chapters were actually kind of funny, this is pretty good so far. Out of curiosity though, does this take place before Fire Emblem: Awakening or during?
If the latter, I also wonder why Frederick and Robin/Avatar aren't in it, though I guess Frederick could've been elsewhere I imagine. Unless it was before Awakening, so Robin and Virion wouldn't have joined up with the Shepherds, yet. I'm sorry if this sounded like taking it too seriously, I was just curious.
Also, would've liked to know Robin and Frederick's reactions to the incident with drunken Sumia and Lissa's prank, but its your story. Its still a good one. Looking forward to next chapter.