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5/15/2019 c1 8LovelyLadyAllie
What a massive slap in the face for Jamie! He's off for a night with his side piece and she dies because he's not there... Damn. Well written, I like the bouncing perspectives and appreciated you not using the typical POV-Jamie/Cathy header that always pulls me out of a story.
1/20/2019 c1 Berry
WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO MY HEART?

Jk but this was really good! Nice!
5/17/2016 c1 4thehufflepuffqueen
This is really depressing. But very well written. A very good...sad...job.
3/6/2016 c1 2AHSloverr
Nooo! *tear rolled down faceA BILLION YEARS FLOW DOWN FACE*
9/9/2015 c1 2phantomrazzledazzler
DID YOU REALLY JUST KILL CATHY.
I hurt inside. But this is good.
6/20/2015 c1 3Magic.E.B
:-( aww….. i'm so sad now! but good job.
6/19/2015 c1 Broadway Evanescence
This was really, really good. it was just so beautiful and sad but just amazing!
6/12/2015 c1 58MusicAngel98
Okay. I have got tears burning in the back of my eyes right now... that was beautiful! I would've never thought to have taken the story in this way and the fact that you did it and wrote it this eloquently and heart-wrenching was just amazing! There are no words to describe how much I loved this story! Keep writing! I don't care if it's Newsies or L5Y, just keep writing!
6/1/2015 c1 onetwothree
Oh my .. this is so heart-breaking ..T_T
I just want a revenge to Jamie for cheating !
Write more..please.._
5/20/2015 c1 biankies
I might be unfamiliar with the characters but I still thought it was a great chapter(or one shot that depends on you). Good luck with the competition. Let me know how you did.

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