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19DraejonSoul
Awww! Thank you for this lovely ending after a harrowing previous chapter. I loved it.
By how much?
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19DraejonSoulAwww! Thank you for this lovely ending after a harrowing previous chapter. I loved it.
By how much?
(colon) (double slash) (slash) works (slash) 32369908
6/24/2021 c17 DraejonSoul
Oh, no...
It's heartwarming and heartbreaking at the same time to think John and Harold had a living will. Like Joss thought, it was practical, what with the nature of their work, but still... ;_;
Oh, no...
It's heartwarming and heartbreaking at the same time to think John and Harold had a living will. Like Joss thought, it was practical, what with the nature of their work, but still... ;_;
6/24/2021 c16 DraejonSoul
Oh, no... what's happening with John? It looks like his stubbornness has gotten him into trouble. And what bad timing! Even with the case of Maggie Barton solved, its aftermath is just as riveting.
Oh, no... what's happening with John? It looks like his stubbornness has gotten him into trouble. And what bad timing! Even with the case of Maggie Barton solved, its aftermath is just as riveting.
6/24/2021 c15 DraejonSoul
A doctor AND a good cook? I won't be surprised at this point of Harold arranged to connect him to people in the culinary business.
A doctor AND a good cook? I won't be surprised at this point of Harold arranged to connect him to people in the culinary business.
6/24/2021 c14 DraejonSoul
I've only stayed reading this yesterday, and I've enjoyed it very much! I wanted you to know how I appreciated how you developed your OC, Steve, without overshadowing the main characters. He felt grounded and relatable.
Glad that John finally woke up! I like how you've gone into the medical details without getting lost in the fine details. I appreciated it. It just drives home John's journey to recovery.
I've only stayed reading this yesterday, and I've enjoyed it very much! I wanted you to know how I appreciated how you developed your OC, Steve, without overshadowing the main characters. He felt grounded and relatable.
Glad that John finally woke up! I like how you've gone into the medical details without getting lost in the fine details. I appreciated it. It just drives home John's journey to recovery.
1/19/2018 c18 27DancingInTheDark85
I have no idea how I missed this story but it was excellent. You obviously know what you’re talking about as the details about riding as well as the medical stuff sounded spot on and your OC’s were well rounded and added good extra dimensions to your story. I also feel I need to add a special mention to Bear and his tennis balls. His inclusion lightened what was a heavy story, which was needed when John was going through hell. And I love the cuddly side of John that Bear manages to bring out.
27DancingInTheDark85I have no idea how I missed this story but it was excellent. You obviously know what you’re talking about as the details about riding as well as the medical stuff sounded spot on and your OC’s were well rounded and added good extra dimensions to your story. I also feel I need to add a special mention to Bear and his tennis balls. His inclusion lightened what was a heavy story, which was needed when John was going through hell. And I love the cuddly side of John that Bear manages to bring out.
12/25/2017 c18 FMC
Thank you! While I have been a fan of Star Trek Voyager fan fiction for a long time - this is only my third read in POI. The story was well fleshed out, the characters very believable, and the plot solid. I kind of thought Finch would be a bit more resourceful about extracting John from the woods, but that would have spoiled the story line. Otherwise a terrific read! Thank you! Sure hope you have more POI stories posted or in the works. Also love that Reese & Finch was not Reese/Finch, but still showed a tremendous depth of love and devotion as befits two men who have served in extreme battle conditions for a long time. Fine job.
Thank you! While I have been a fan of Star Trek Voyager fan fiction for a long time - this is only my third read in POI. The story was well fleshed out, the characters very believable, and the plot solid. I kind of thought Finch would be a bit more resourceful about extracting John from the woods, but that would have spoiled the story line. Otherwise a terrific read! Thank you! Sure hope you have more POI stories posted or in the works. Also love that Reese & Finch was not Reese/Finch, but still showed a tremendous depth of love and devotion as befits two men who have served in extreme battle conditions for a long time. Fine job.
9/14/2016 c18 Singing Silverwings
A beautifully written story, very satisfying conclusion. Well done!
A beautifully written story, very satisfying conclusion. Well done!
7/8/2016 c18 Anonymous
Wow. Just... wow. This story was incredible. Amazing plot, excellent portayal of the characters themselves and your OCs. This story deserves more credit than it has.
On another note, there were also some very inspirational things spoken about. I'm not sure if you did it on purpose or if it was purely incidental, but either way, it brought a new light to the things that John and the others do, why they do it.
The medical side of the story seemed incredibly well thought and thorough. It's not often that a writer will go to such great lengths to make a fanfiction as accurate as possible.
Amazing story. I enjoyed every paragraph of it!
Wow. Just... wow. This story was incredible. Amazing plot, excellent portayal of the characters themselves and your OCs. This story deserves more credit than it has.
On another note, there were also some very inspirational things spoken about. I'm not sure if you did it on purpose or if it was purely incidental, but either way, it brought a new light to the things that John and the others do, why they do it.
The medical side of the story seemed incredibly well thought and thorough. It's not often that a writer will go to such great lengths to make a fanfiction as accurate as possible.
Amazing story. I enjoyed every paragraph of it!
4/13/2016 c18 Petra
Best story ever. Keep writing, please
Best story ever. Keep writing, please
4/12/2016 c18 shejams
That was amazing. I absolutely loved it!
I could see this as an actual episode. Your characterization of everyone was spot on. The plot, drama, angst and humor were so well written and well thought out. I couldn't stop reading once I started. I lost precious sleep and now I'm going to take a nap. :D
And may I also say: I love Bear. I think he's so cute. Who'd thought the vigilantes adopting a dog would enhance the show.
I was rewatching season one and was like, 'where's Bear?' Lol
Anyway... Thank you for such an enjoyable read.
That was amazing. I absolutely loved it!
I could see this as an actual episode. Your characterization of everyone was spot on. The plot, drama, angst and humor were so well written and well thought out. I couldn't stop reading once I started. I lost precious sleep and now I'm going to take a nap. :D
And may I also say: I love Bear. I think he's so cute. Who'd thought the vigilantes adopting a dog would enhance the show.
I was rewatching season one and was like, 'where's Bear?' Lol
Anyway... Thank you for such an enjoyable read.
2/21/2016 c18 10Hawkeye4077
Wow, I've so many good things to say about this story! Very realistic and enjoyable! You did very well keeping everyon in character through all the scenarios you had them in, including Bear, which made this a pleasure to read. Your plot is definitely one I could see playing out in the show and well executed. I thought your OCs were very good, even the baddies, and Maggie was refreshingly professional compared with most female OC numbers I read on here. Dr Maxwell was good too and he really must be one of the most lauded trauma surgeons in the USA to manage all of John's complex injuries and complications without even a nurse! I found it interesting that you addressed Dr Maxwell's own psychological demons, it made him a much more believable and relatable character to give him just a bit of depth and resolution.
There's an amazing attention to detail in this story that can come from only personal experience or extensive research - the horse-riding and medical situations stand out the most - and as someone with personal experience of trauma, surgery and post-op care I hope you will accept my congratulations on doing such a fantastic job with those aspects. There was just one little thing I wanted to correct though as it was pretty jarring - if you did an MRI on John you'd certainly have known he had retained a barb because it would likely have shredded him even further and been pulled out of him, a CT would have been the way to go and more informative than an xray as it shows up soft tissue very well and is the imaging modality of choice in a trauma situation. Please however don't take that as a slight on your story, it was truly fantastic and I look forward to reading your next one... Looking through your story list it looks like we have very similar show interests so SG-1 it is!
10Hawkeye4077Wow, I've so many good things to say about this story! Very realistic and enjoyable! You did very well keeping everyon in character through all the scenarios you had them in, including Bear, which made this a pleasure to read. Your plot is definitely one I could see playing out in the show and well executed. I thought your OCs were very good, even the baddies, and Maggie was refreshingly professional compared with most female OC numbers I read on here. Dr Maxwell was good too and he really must be one of the most lauded trauma surgeons in the USA to manage all of John's complex injuries and complications without even a nurse! I found it interesting that you addressed Dr Maxwell's own psychological demons, it made him a much more believable and relatable character to give him just a bit of depth and resolution.
There's an amazing attention to detail in this story that can come from only personal experience or extensive research - the horse-riding and medical situations stand out the most - and as someone with personal experience of trauma, surgery and post-op care I hope you will accept my congratulations on doing such a fantastic job with those aspects. There was just one little thing I wanted to correct though as it was pretty jarring - if you did an MRI on John you'd certainly have known he had retained a barb because it would likely have shredded him even further and been pulled out of him, a CT would have been the way to go and more informative than an xray as it shows up soft tissue very well and is the imaging modality of choice in a trauma situation. Please however don't take that as a slight on your story, it was truly fantastic and I look forward to reading your next one... Looking through your story list it looks like we have very similar show interests so SG-1 it is!
1/23/2016 c18 6justayellowumbrella
This was such a well-written, well-developed story. I enjoyed every chapter. Your character development was spot on, and I loved the relationship between Finch and Reese. Had all the right combinations of drama and humor. I do hope we see more stories!
6justayellowumbrellaThis was such a well-written, well-developed story. I enjoyed every chapter. Your character development was spot on, and I loved the relationship between Finch and Reese. Had all the right combinations of drama and humor. I do hope we see more stories!
11/17/2015 c18 43Swissmounty
Thank you for writing this interesting story! It is greatly appreciated.
43SwissmountyThank you for writing this interesting story! It is greatly appreciated.
11/11/2015 c6 Swissmounty
Love your story very much!
And rofl about the sheep named "Caviezel"!
Where I live, many people carry this surname, but no sheep would ever be called that way. It would be named "Gion-Gieri" or "Gian-Duri" or "Ladina".
This is sooo funny! Wish the duo luck.
Love your story very much!
And rofl about the sheep named "Caviezel"!
Where I live, many people carry this surname, but no sheep would ever be called that way. It would be named "Gion-Gieri" or "Gian-Duri" or "Ladina".
This is sooo funny! Wish the duo luck.