for Nature Versus Nurture (Part II) Past Meets Present8/7/2023 c11 Vexeria17
My hypothetical foot is still at the ready. It's itching to punt something with audacity
My hypothetical foot is still at the ready. It's itching to punt something with audacity
8/7/2023 c10 Vexeria17
Not even shredder makes me want to punt an alien as bad as Mira is right now (Д))彡
Not even shredder makes me want to punt an alien as bad as Mira is right now (Д))彡
8/7/2023 c9 Vexeria17
I was hoping Raph would figure Leo out soon. I'm glad it worked. But now I'm worried about the consequences of the idea he planted in his head
I was hoping Raph would figure Leo out soon. I'm glad it worked. But now I'm worried about the consequences of the idea he planted in his head
8/7/2023 c7 Vexeria17
Parenting a teenager who was part of a ninja cult must be frustrating. Glad I only parent a small adhd gremlin instead
Parenting a teenager who was part of a ninja cult must be frustrating. Glad I only parent a small adhd gremlin instead
8/7/2023 c6 Vexeria17
Leo.. information is a powerful weapon, it will help the ones you are protecting to be able to protect themselves
Leo.. information is a powerful weapon, it will help the ones you are protecting to be able to protect themselves
8/7/2023 c5 Vexeria17
(ooh pretzels! I'll make beer dip)
Awww I'm so glad Mikey had some kind of friend. Poor guy was really isolated, probably the most out of the boys.
(ooh pretzels! I'll make beer dip)
Awww I'm so glad Mikey had some kind of friend. Poor guy was really isolated, probably the most out of the boys.
3/28/2022 c6 Guest
Are you referencing the IDW comic series with this story? Because if you are, I can see the reference to it.
Are you referencing the IDW comic series with this story? Because if you are, I can see the reference to it.
2/15/2016 c7 
5Nydiena
It is frustrating that the brother's simply do not open up to each other. That really is the problem. In trying to protect each other, they end up hurting each other. I love the introduction of April to the story. No turtle story is complete without her. The mention of our favorite, masked, hockey-stick-wielding vigilante makes me wonder if we shall meet him in the third story. Perhaps Raphael will run into him? My heart aches for how most the brothers are I trying to open up to each other. While they were making slow progress the circumstances were working against them. If it wasn't for the turf war, I'm sure things would have gone more smoothly. But nothing really goes all that smoothly for these boys, do they? Master Splinter is taking an interesting approach to parenting. I understand that he is not one to force his hand on sons who have not been under his care for so long. I feel sad for him. If only they would take his words on wisdom. It is sort of odd seeing how different Leo's relationship with Splinter is in this universe. Instead of confiding in him and seeking his approval, he is hiding things from him. This was a great sequel and I am eager to read the third part.
5NydienaIt is frustrating that the brother's simply do not open up to each other. That really is the problem. In trying to protect each other, they end up hurting each other. I love the introduction of April to the story. No turtle story is complete without her. The mention of our favorite, masked, hockey-stick-wielding vigilante makes me wonder if we shall meet him in the third story. Perhaps Raphael will run into him? My heart aches for how most the brothers are I trying to open up to each other. While they were making slow progress the circumstances were working against them. If it wasn't for the turf war, I'm sure things would have gone more smoothly. But nothing really goes all that smoothly for these boys, do they? Master Splinter is taking an interesting approach to parenting. I understand that he is not one to force his hand on sons who have not been under his care for so long. I feel sad for him. If only they would take his words on wisdom. It is sort of odd seeing how different Leo's relationship with Splinter is in this universe. Instead of confiding in him and seeking his approval, he is hiding things from him. This was a great sequel and I am eager to read the third part.
12/21/2015 c13 56Natalie Ryan
This is just getting better and better. I didn't have much time to review the earlier chapters because I raced through them as to get to the third part of this story, I like to call it saga.
First of all I understand completely why Leo did what he did, although that resulted with his family going sideways.
Mikey does not understand why Leo did that and I can understand him really. He is hurt. He really thought that everything would be fine just like it was supposed to be in the start. But the past claimed its victims once more.
Don is a little stupid in the ebd for a smart turtle. He let his guard down and he let his brother discover the truth. Anyway wht did he need to help Mira after all? I mean you shouldn't rely on work when you are confused. It could help you, yes, but it could push you off the edge of doibg more harm than goid e.g. making mistaked.
Master Splinter is really hurt. His old heart has had enough for a lifetime, but he could have seen it coming from his stubborn teen sons.
And Raph is the one that understands Leo the best. He's been through hell and that's what hardened him so much. He is hardcore, no words, no emotions shown, just punches and kicking someone's butt (shell) to prevent the emotional streak to vent off him. He gets why Leo left. To protect them. And he would've done the same if he were Leo. I think that the two of them are like twins. Opposite, yet so similar. The two sides of the same book. One opens the book, the other closes it. In between there are Mikey, Donnie, Splinter and their friends.
About Mira, if I ever get my hands on her, let's say it would be a nasty fight. No one will leave uninjured, but she will take the thicker end of the stick.
I really liked the part about the tattoo. I can imagine him having that tattoo and the burden that comes with it. The only problem with Leo is that he is a turtle that feels guilty for everything. And he doesn't voice his worries. He needs a bear hug.
I really want to see the brothers together. They function better as a team, as a family. The strenghts if one are weaknesses to other. In sync they are unstoppable.
Virtual huggs and kissed to you and keep writing. Great story!
56Natalie RyanThis is just getting better and better. I didn't have much time to review the earlier chapters because I raced through them as to get to the third part of this story, I like to call it saga.
First of all I understand completely why Leo did what he did, although that resulted with his family going sideways.
Mikey does not understand why Leo did that and I can understand him really. He is hurt. He really thought that everything would be fine just like it was supposed to be in the start. But the past claimed its victims once more.
Don is a little stupid in the ebd for a smart turtle. He let his guard down and he let his brother discover the truth. Anyway wht did he need to help Mira after all? I mean you shouldn't rely on work when you are confused. It could help you, yes, but it could push you off the edge of doibg more harm than goid e.g. making mistaked.
Master Splinter is really hurt. His old heart has had enough for a lifetime, but he could have seen it coming from his stubborn teen sons.
And Raph is the one that understands Leo the best. He's been through hell and that's what hardened him so much. He is hardcore, no words, no emotions shown, just punches and kicking someone's butt (shell) to prevent the emotional streak to vent off him. He gets why Leo left. To protect them. And he would've done the same if he were Leo. I think that the two of them are like twins. Opposite, yet so similar. The two sides of the same book. One opens the book, the other closes it. In between there are Mikey, Donnie, Splinter and their friends.
About Mira, if I ever get my hands on her, let's say it would be a nasty fight. No one will leave uninjured, but she will take the thicker end of the stick.
I really liked the part about the tattoo. I can imagine him having that tattoo and the burden that comes with it. The only problem with Leo is that he is a turtle that feels guilty for everything. And he doesn't voice his worries. He needs a bear hug.
I really want to see the brothers together. They function better as a team, as a family. The strenghts if one are weaknesses to other. In sync they are unstoppable.
Virtual huggs and kissed to you and keep writing. Great story!