6/23/2015 c3 Haruka Shinonono
Please update

6/17/2015 c2 Straight 'til Morning
Good, but make the chapters longer please...

6/14/2015 c3 5NALUfuckinlover
I love your story but I think you should first put in the beginning that she doesn't really feel anything but the love she had for him as a kid so no blushing when Happy tells her she likes Natsu and then later on as it goes on she falls in love cause its kind of weird when she blushes because of Natsu. Anyway that's my opinion and its most likely how you were doing it so you don't have to listen to me.

6/12/2015 c3 Sara lovelymusic
i...

6/12/2015 c3 8Compucles
The chapters are way too short, and it really shows in the overly fast pacing, but it's got some potential, so I'll follow it for now.

5/29/2015 c2 122Dark Shining Light
You're going to hate me after this review but I hope you think about what I'm about to say before you judge me harshly. You have a good idea and I want you to succeed. However, this story is extremely rushed. When I read the summary, I thought this was going to be a little Natsu growing up with Lucy story, where we would see all these fluffy moments. However, all you did was summarize. You implied that Nalu moments existed yet I wasn't shown any bonding between the two...and Natsu's already grown up! Like I said, I like the idea and I hope you take my comments into consideration when you write. I want you to do well. Take care,
-Dark Shining Light

5/29/2015 c2 Sara lovelymusic
Natsu, you douch bag. You left Lucy AGAIN!