for PMD: The Light in the Storm12/11/2015 c17 Guest
That was really funny when girls used attract! xD And Magnus that mocks them! x) It was just huge!
That was really funny when girls used attract! xD And Magnus that mocks them! x) It was just huge!
12/10/2015 c16 Guest
Magnus don't seem in love with Caroline, but I've feeling that Noc yes.
And that's really crazy how you can convey emotion as well... I had my eyes teared up when I read the passage where Manaphy leaves.
Magnus don't seem in love with Caroline, but I've feeling that Noc yes.
And that's really crazy how you can convey emotion as well... I had my eyes teared up when I read the passage where Manaphy leaves.
12/10/2015 c15 Kurashi
Yeah! Team Hope is in the place! Since the time what I proposed you my team...
By cons, I do not see how the fact to say or not to Vulcan is an opportunity. But I have a question... what do Team Virus want in Vulcan?
Vulcan acts like a father... I love that!
Yeah! Team Hope is in the place! Since the time what I proposed you my team...
By cons, I do not see how the fact to say or not to Vulcan is an opportunity. But I have a question... what do Team Virus want in Vulcan?
Vulcan acts like a father... I love that!
12/10/2015 c14 Kurashi
Me, I always saw Manaphy like a little boy, so that's good.
I love this moment where everyone laugh because Vulcan said that Manaphy thinks he's his mum! I died laughing in front my screen! xD
Me, I always saw Manaphy like a little boy, so that's good.
I love this moment where everyone laugh because Vulcan said that Manaphy thinks he's his mum! I died laughing in front my screen! xD
12/10/2015 c13 Kurashi
Roy is an interesting rookie, ha ha ha! It will be tense between him and Jade! xD
Baby Manaphy will be born soon 3
You're really strong to describe places.
Roy is an interesting rookie, ha ha ha! It will be tense between him and Jade! xD
Baby Manaphy will be born soon 3
You're really strong to describe places.
12/9/2015 c12 Kurashi
Good chapter! But what happened to Jade? Her mother is - normaly - a Frolass. Why tries she to ruin her life ? For revenge from Connor and Vulcain (if that's really her that the Team Firestorm beat) ?
Good chapter! But what happened to Jade? Her mother is - normaly - a Frolass. Why tries she to ruin her life ? For revenge from Connor and Vulcain (if that's really her that the Team Firestorm beat) ?
12/8/2015 c11 Kurashi
I'm really sorry, I hadn't time to read. School... Y'know know that.
Brief, in the game, Frolass was mainly used like a simple boss of dungeon, but there... There, she've a soul! That's good ! Continues!
I'm really sorry, I hadn't time to read. School... Y'know know that.
Brief, in the game, Frolass was mainly used like a simple boss of dungeon, but there... There, she've a soul! That's good ! Continues!
11/5/2015 c33 
17AeroJester203
Love it! I wish *I* had thought of that possibility for Darkrai. Excellent end to their battle.
17AeroJester203Love it! I wish *I* had thought of that possibility for Darkrai. Excellent end to their battle.
10/23/2015 c42 Talgar
good but the 3rd Pov will be a bit strange for the story that is usally 1st. its good but I prefer the 1st pov.
good but the 3rd Pov will be a bit strange for the story that is usally 1st. its good but I prefer the 1st pov.
8/23/2015 c10 Kurashi
Good chapter! However, be careful not to confuse POVs. You have confused Alice's POV with that of Rose.
Good chapter! However, be careful not to confuse POVs. You have confused Alice's POV with that of Rose.
8/21/2015 c41 MissyMattingly
I hope I speak for all of us saying that we understand, school and work comes first I just hope you continue stories when you have a spare moment
I hope I speak for all of us saying that we understand, school and work comes first I just hope you continue stories when you have a spare moment
8/12/2015 c40 Hobbes22
Hype! Your writing has improved so much since the start of your first fic, and this story itself has improved so much from its start. Great stuff.
Hype! Your writing has improved so much since the start of your first fic, and this story itself has improved so much from its start. Great stuff.