
8/11/2015 c39 Hobbes22
You know, this story sorta felt kinda generic near the middle, but I'm glad I read through. I love feeling feelings, and I am definitely feeling feelings right now.
You know, this story sorta felt kinda generic near the middle, but I'm glad I read through. I love feeling feelings, and I am definitely feeling feelings right now.
8/11/2015 c39 Guest
Oh god. I think I might pretend this chapter never happened. So sad :-(
Oh god. I think I might pretend this chapter never happened. So sad :-(
7/28/2015 c32 Talgar
Dark crater will be the hardest dungeon yet.. those combuskon with that broken mirror move..
Dark crater will be the hardest dungeon yet.. those combuskon with that broken mirror move..
7/26/2015 c31 MissyMattingly
You got the heroes names wrong you said meowth and rio not Conner and Vulcan are you taking the text directly from your game somehow
You got the heroes names wrong you said meowth and rio not Conner and Vulcan are you taking the text directly from your game somehow
7/21/2015 c28 MissyMattingly
I love your stories they're really what the games should have been and I'm not much a reviewer but I did notice that you made a mistake on the first pov on chapter 28 it said Vulcan but it was Connors. I think I've always been a bit of a nit picker I still love your stories and I'm hoping after you're done with this when you can continue with Grovyles so keep up the awesome work
I love your stories they're really what the games should have been and I'm not much a reviewer but I did notice that you made a mistake on the first pov on chapter 28 it said Vulcan but it was Connors. I think I've always been a bit of a nit picker I still love your stories and I'm hoping after you're done with this when you can continue with Grovyles so keep up the awesome work
7/17/2015 c27 Guest
Good chapter, but I don't really like how the partner is suspicious.
Good chapter, but I don't really like how the partner is suspicious.