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2/24/2017 c1 50Kaline Reine
This is one of my very favorite ZoSan fics for sure! I especially like the witty banter between the two of them and the tension makes it perfect. I loved every second of it. You really know how to tell a story. ;D
1/2/2016 c1 10GaLemarouRinkA
Nice! But the paragraphs are too long. My eyes hurt while i read xD
Apart from that, this story is awesome! Maybe too OOC haha but it's nicely written
8/10/2015 c1 12Asuke23x
to qoute an actor (gilbert godfreyHoly fuck is this wrong, but holy hell is it erotic" that is to say that I liked. very much. probably more then I job! heehee
6/19/2015 c1 LilMizFuNsiZe
Despite the OCCness, i think this story is really good considering this is your first time writing smut. Keep up the good work and always continue writing! :)
6/8/2015 c1 Rinn6969
Good story! But whrn writing smut make sure its physically possible, unless zoro can bend in half then i dont think he can be at sanjis nips and grind against him at the same time
5/18/2015 c1 54GothicNinjaKitty
One question: why would Usopp make a lust bomb...? for enemies' distractions, yet I think it would be distracting for them as well. I would think Franky would of created that one being one of the only pervs of the group

Nice job with the story, though Sanji seems a little OOC but who am I to complain? this is Fanfiction! :)

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