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6/1/2015 c3 34thoroughlymodernJulie
Somebody's getting a bit pushy... it's sweet of him, but it's dangerous, too. Sigh.

I like that you've got the pressure coming in from all sides: the children, the abbey, herself, and him. It's satisfyingly inclusive, and really piles on the stress it places on Maria. She's got to sort out for herself everything that happened and yet she's got him, the children, and her own vocation basically smothering her to do something she's not prepared to do. It's heartbreaking, but accurate. Can't wait to read more!
6/1/2015 c3 donnymad
Love this story so sweet xxx
6/1/2015 c3 26Mie779
wonderful chapter... this is moving along very well... but what will happen at the party and Elsa returning... ?
5/31/2015 c3 58gothicbutterfly95
Wow, wow wow! Love it.
5/31/2015 c3 24charleybec
Oooo! So excited to read the new chapter! I can see Maria's inner turmoil over what she wants to happen but knowing the reality of what IS going to happen (ie Georg marrying Elsa).

Then I'm so excited that there is KISSING! So nice and hot! And a proposal... MARIA! He's a hot guy, you love him and he wants to marry you! Just accept! don't think, Go and DO! Ok: I'm calm now! Excited for the next chapter!
5/26/2015 c2 Maria
Awe! Hope you post quickly! It's shaping into a real cute story.
5/26/2015 c2 2patrickssong
Ah yes, that awkward morning after. And of course it is never made easy for Captain and Governess living in a household filled with children who need them. I love this, they are both unsure, both frightened, but at the same time exalted at the potential for what could be in the future. Beautifully written :)
5/26/2015 c2 34thoroughlymodernJulie
Ah, here comes the conflict... he wants her to stay and be his wife and she's got it in her head that she *will* leave. This should be verrrrryyyy interesting... I do hope that they do have that conversation, though. Even if Maria takes it and turns it around on him with plans to leave, there are things that should be said. Great chapter, I can see there's going to be a certain degree of drawn out angst here and it's perfect.
5/25/2015 c2 33augiesannie
Such good stuff as M&G circle each other cautiously. Her finger on her lips reminding him of her kiss. Her avoiding looking at the spot. Yes, I think they are past formalities!
Great job!
5/25/2015 c2 58gothicbutterfly95
Love this! This is AU at it's best. You've taken the reality (or what could have been reality) and made it work work incredibly believably with the film's plot.
GREAT WORK!
5/25/2015 c2 24charleybec
So great! Loved the 'morning after' tension - both not regretting it yet both unable to tell the other how they feel. I hope they get to talk soon. Great job!
5/25/2015 c2 26Mie779
Wonderful chapter... do hope they will get a chance to speak to one another soon... keep the chapters coming ;)
5/24/2015 c1 33augiesannie
Oh, wow. This was amazing. It's not easy to bring them together this way without G seeming to take advantage in an unseemly way, but you kept the, er, playing field nice and level. It was believable that they got caught up in each other and G still, despite it all, seems a gentleman. Can this be happening to me indeed! Great, great job with the prompt.
5/24/2015 c1 LoveJulie35
Wonderful story. Can't wait for more. Please Update Soon.
5/23/2015 c1 35lemacd
Georg, such a guy. Her arousal belies her virtue, but he is so sure HE gave her her first orgasm.

ok, that's just... i'm kidding.

One of the things I love about your writing is that you don't waste time. This is clearly going to be about Georg and Maria and sex so why waste time w/ a lot of prelude? (although, the set up w/ Louisa's accident was certainly a good way to get us in their headspace)

but wait... the only encounter of it's kind? what kind of tease is that?! maybe maria is just in some kind of state of denial. that none of it could mean what she really wants it to mean. we shall see. hope to see another update soon. nicely done.
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