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10/10/2015 c10 donnymad
Oh this is getting really good can't wait for the next chapter thank you xxx
10/10/2015 c10 58gothicbutterfly95
Yikes! That was hard.
What an awful way for them to find out. I suspect by the next part all seven of them will know.
And yet it was all filled with such wonderful moments; her self-consciousness, kisses on the terrace, that ending...
Just wonderful
10/10/2015 c10 28Mie779
oh you... not this... I can understand the kids anger... but please don't let something happen to the baby! how will they work through this... please update soon
10/10/2015 c10 15ThePoorDidntWantThisOne
I'm shocked! How awful! I was just cringing as the girls made their way down to the terrace...

I feel bad for everyone in this scenario. The poor girls finding out in the worst way, Maria being sad and humiliated and Georg being angry.

Such a cliffhanger! I love it! Fantastic job of keeping us all on the edge of our seats. Can't wait for the update!
10/7/2015 c9 6chakochick
Excellent update! Can't believe I missed my email about it until today. I had a feeling that the Reverend Mother would find out...but she should. LOVE every chapter and can't wait for more. Bravo!
9/23/2015 c9 2patrickssong
Such a cute chapter. I love the first paragraph and the trepidation Maria has about concealing her condition from the Reverend Mother. But what stands out for me is the change in her since Georg's return home. You wrote her so well when she was stressed, unhappy and nervous about him not returning, and now she is happy and relaxed. Almost makes the reader relax in sympathy with her!

-Including the Captain's dimples. Always a favourite :)
-I love the way the Reverend Mother can see the difference in Maria's demeanour and her appearance now that her sea Captain is home.

-I had a chuckle at the way the Reverend Mother put both Maria and Georg under the spotlight as soon as one or the other was in the room alone. She is no dummy. I love the way she pushes the reason for their marrying. It is very cute to see Maria and especially the Captain squirm under her scrutiny.

-And Georg's honesty about surrounding him marrying 'the help'. No matter how much he loves Maria, he knows the score. But doesn't really give a damn. And I did smile at the fact that she wanted them to not live in sin up until the wedding. I am wondering how long this will last ;)

-I like the way that you let them spend time together getting to know each other. Before their night of passion and even in the weeks proceeding it, they still don't really know much about the other on an intimate (well you know what I mean!) level. And you gave their characters this opportunity which was lovely. I love it when the Captain opens up more of himself to her.

-And of course the passion they hold for each other. It is difficult, but it will surely be just as wonderful afterwards. Maria is a minx. Poor Georg has his work cut out for him.

Thank you for this lovely story. I need something heartwarming lately, and it hits the spot very nicely :)
9/20/2015 c9 Maria
Lovely. Now the Baroness has even more reason to gossip.
9/19/2015 c9 Guest
OMG! I am so excited haha
I love it! 3
Roni
9/20/2015 c9 33augiesannie
Sigh. So, so sweet the way they are both focused on the baby as well as each other.
That Reverend Mother, she's nobody's fool. I couldn't believe they were going to get away with it and ... they didn't!
I love the details you give us like the green mercedes and the grey cape. So vivid and make the story come alive.
I think it's so great that you pursued this AU angle and I am so so enjoying it.
9/20/2015 c9 24charleybec
Wow! I love, love, loved this! I loved how caring and reassuring Georg was for a nervous Maria as they arrived at the Abbey. I loved how pretty clued in RM is - firstly questioning Georg, then Maria about the reasons for their marriage then being direct about Maria's pregnancy. Going to confession? Well I can see Maria doing that, but Georg? Wow! he must love her! Then I loved the sweetness of their time together in Georg's study. Kisses, love kisses - and of course baby movements (although I had to admit, I always felt my babies move many months before anyone else could feel them move from the outside). As for whether I think they'll be able to keep their hands off each other... well, no. M and G sexy time. Always!

Great job, and ! can't wait for more!
9/19/2015 c9 58gothicbutterfly95
Awww, gorgeous. All of it.
Her being nervous (and rightly so) about the meeting. Him reassuring her it would be fine - which it was, despite the news coming out. The childrens' reactions to the news, kissing by the fire and feeling the baby - it was ALL WONDERFUL!
9/17/2015 c7 PLZ UPDATE
I'm getting impatient over here omg I love this story so much and I need an update please that would be an excellent treat :)
9/19/2015 c9 28Mie779
wow... wonderful chapter... love their talk with the reverend mother... she saw right through Maria and knew about the baby... ;) oh and this last part with the kissing and teasing... swooney... LOVED it... more of that please... and move on to the wedding soon... please... ;)
9/19/2015 c9 Honkytonkangel
I'm happy they didn't get into trouble with the Rev mother. They are so cute together. Loved that they felt their baby at the end that was so sweet.
9/19/2015 c9 1mvtfan
Aw. Very sweet! Can't wait till the next part!
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