for What They Wouldn't Do6/22/2015 c8 gamerchic
Oh man I was so happy to finally have a new chapter to read! Sarah with a shirtless Matt? Yay! Just kidding. Actually I really enjoyed her and Foggy getting to talk and I also really liked her comment about Matt being a vigilante in a lawyer costume. Please write the next chapter soon, I want to see what happens! :)
Oh man I was so happy to finally have a new chapter to read! Sarah with a shirtless Matt? Yay! Just kidding. Actually I really enjoyed her and Foggy getting to talk and I also really liked her comment about Matt being a vigilante in a lawyer costume. Please write the next chapter soon, I want to see what happens! :)
6/22/2015 c8 
4UnraveledGhoul
Such a good chapter! You always manage to keep everyone in character, and I really love this story. I think it's on my top faves actually! 3
4UnraveledGhoulSuch a good chapter! You always manage to keep everyone in character, and I really love this story. I think it's on my top faves actually! 3
6/22/2015 c8 2thesameoldfearsx
Great chapter! I'm happy they fell for the 'relationship' thing regarding the box of Yates stuff, but now im worried about Ronan because he is one creepy bloke and I feel like he's going to catch onto what Sarah is doing sooner or later.
Now onto Matt...what was he doing? Who was he trying to rough up or threaten that got him into that state? I'm curious but that will only make me more excited for the next update.
I hope he doesn't flip out when he realises Sarah is in his flat, I mean she has stayed with him and helped Foggy with patching him up...but it is Matt we're talking about.
Anyway you write the characters fantastically, and they are so believable! I love how you're taking the Matt/Sarah slowly as it makes it more realistic and we are getting to see their interactions, actually building up a relationship.
Can't wait for more!
2thesameoldfearsxGreat chapter! I'm happy they fell for the 'relationship' thing regarding the box of Yates stuff, but now im worried about Ronan because he is one creepy bloke and I feel like he's going to catch onto what Sarah is doing sooner or later.
Now onto Matt...what was he doing? Who was he trying to rough up or threaten that got him into that state? I'm curious but that will only make me more excited for the next update.
I hope he doesn't flip out when he realises Sarah is in his flat, I mean she has stayed with him and helped Foggy with patching him up...but it is Matt we're talking about.
Anyway you write the characters fantastically, and they are so believable! I love how you're taking the Matt/Sarah slowly as it makes it more realistic and we are getting to see their interactions, actually building up a relationship.
Can't wait for more!
6/22/2015 c8 Nyx-Arae
Oh, oh, oh, I'm sensing a disaster coming. Matt won't be amused to find his favorite girl in his apartment. Or maybe he will, if he finally realizes that a pretty lady is taking care of him :D
Lovely chapter as always, I'm looking forward for the next one. :)
Oh, oh, oh, I'm sensing a disaster coming. Matt won't be amused to find his favorite girl in his apartment. Or maybe he will, if he finally realizes that a pretty lady is taking care of him :D
Lovely chapter as always, I'm looking forward for the next one. :)
6/22/2015 c8 Amythra
So engaging, when I see there's an update the first thing I do is kind of cheer to myself and then I check the length and if it's a long one I "yay!" xDDD
I love this story so much. Foggy is awesome and now we have confirmation that Sarah is hot haha. The way things for Sarah are getting worse at work gradually is very worrying and unnerving. I think you got the pace and consequences really well done. I understand that Matt doesn't kill, that is one of his virtues and at the same time a drawback cause it makes everything that much more complicated, leaving loose ends. In the series you could see how it slows his progress (example: Claire getting abducted because of the russian guy that "woke" up from the comma). And you are getting that point across, taking down Orion is going to be a slow painful process. So realistic. And now i'm done with my rambling lol. Thank you for your story and keep up the awesome work! :D
So engaging, when I see there's an update the first thing I do is kind of cheer to myself and then I check the length and if it's a long one I "yay!" xDDD
I love this story so much. Foggy is awesome and now we have confirmation that Sarah is hot haha. The way things for Sarah are getting worse at work gradually is very worrying and unnerving. I think you got the pace and consequences really well done. I understand that Matt doesn't kill, that is one of his virtues and at the same time a drawback cause it makes everything that much more complicated, leaving loose ends. In the series you could see how it slows his progress (example: Claire getting abducted because of the russian guy that "woke" up from the comma). And you are getting that point across, taking down Orion is going to be a slow painful process. So realistic. And now i'm done with my rambling lol. Thank you for your story and keep up the awesome work! :D
6/20/2015 c7 1InLoveAndCrazy
This is so fantastic. I love everything about it. You've completely captured Matt and Daredevil. Sarah feels like she belongs in the established show and I love your original storyline. 100/5 stars!
1InLoveAndCrazyThis is so fantastic. I love everything about it. You've completely captured Matt and Daredevil. Sarah feels like she belongs in the established show and I love your original storyline. 100/5 stars!
6/20/2015 c4 clarawho
"Are fourth graders a big demographic for meth?" -an absolute brilliant line I snorted :)). Also I feel like the scene with Matt and Foggy came at just the right time; a right placed light note.
"Are fourth graders a big demographic for meth?" -an absolute brilliant line I snorted :)). Also I feel like the scene with Matt and Foggy came at just the right time; a right placed light note.
6/18/2015 c7 11Aoi Dragon
So... I've been following this story for a while. I rarely review until it's finished. This is one of the best OC/Canon Character stories I've seen. She doesn't magically have super powers, she doesn't immediately get the guy. I really do like Sarah and empathize with her a lot since I had family that went through the beginnings of Alzheimer's toward the end of their lives. It's usually either the body or the mind that goes, rarely both. I wanted to hug Sarah in that last chapter.
As for the romance, I can see Matt falling first and not realizing it or even being in denial about it because he doesn't want to put her in danger. He already admires her for her courage to stand up to him even when she's terrified. But hey, other relationships started out more rocky; it's been a romantic theme at least since Pride and Prejudice (also insert minor fangirling over the pairing of CaptainSwan of Once Upon a Time). However, girls/women shouldn't want or need to FIX their significant others. HE should want to be better FOR HER, and vice-versa if she has issues. That's actually something I saw in Matt at the end of this chapter - he's trying to show her that he can be better and he's not only Daredevil.
I had more to say, but I just realized it's after midnight - almost one - and now I've forgotten. Maybe I'll remember later on. If you don't see another review for a while, I'm still reading. As you can see, I do long reviews; I like having a lot to say (although I feel like I didn't really say much of anything of substance).
Anyway, anxiously waiting for another chapter!
~Aoi Dragon
11Aoi DragonSo... I've been following this story for a while. I rarely review until it's finished. This is one of the best OC/Canon Character stories I've seen. She doesn't magically have super powers, she doesn't immediately get the guy. I really do like Sarah and empathize with her a lot since I had family that went through the beginnings of Alzheimer's toward the end of their lives. It's usually either the body or the mind that goes, rarely both. I wanted to hug Sarah in that last chapter.
As for the romance, I can see Matt falling first and not realizing it or even being in denial about it because he doesn't want to put her in danger. He already admires her for her courage to stand up to him even when she's terrified. But hey, other relationships started out more rocky; it's been a romantic theme at least since Pride and Prejudice (also insert minor fangirling over the pairing of CaptainSwan of Once Upon a Time). However, girls/women shouldn't want or need to FIX their significant others. HE should want to be better FOR HER, and vice-versa if she has issues. That's actually something I saw in Matt at the end of this chapter - he's trying to show her that he can be better and he's not only Daredevil.
I had more to say, but I just realized it's after midnight - almost one - and now I've forgotten. Maybe I'll remember later on. If you don't see another review for a while, I'm still reading. As you can see, I do long reviews; I like having a lot to say (although I feel like I didn't really say much of anything of substance).
Anyway, anxiously waiting for another chapter!
~Aoi Dragon
6/18/2015 c7 1acosytoken
Oh my god. This story is amazing. Your OC is actually realistic and not some wisecracking perfect Mary Sue. I love that the romance is super slow burn, cause it'll be that much sweeter when they get together! Ahhh I just love your writing!
1acosytokenOh my god. This story is amazing. Your OC is actually realistic and not some wisecracking perfect Mary Sue. I love that the romance is super slow burn, cause it'll be that much sweeter when they get together! Ahhh I just love your writing!
6/18/2015 c1 Guest
I think you write Matt very accurately and honestly. He is going to going to to be threatening and gritty because that is what his situation calls for, and he will do what he has to. I also like that you made Sarah the same, it's very realistic.
I think you write Matt very accurately and honestly. He is going to going to to be threatening and gritty because that is what his situation calls for, and he will do what he has to. I also like that you made Sarah the same, it's very realistic.
6/17/2015 c7 MarbleMoose
I love this! It feels incredibly realistic, and doesn't stray too far from the show's morally grey and gritty premise, while being a bit less depressing and dark (I think it's because no one's gotten their face crushed with a bowling ball). All of the characters really act and feel like they do in the show (especially Lantom, I'm amazed at how well you've written him), and I like how you don't shy away from (and even embrace!) Matt's darker, more morally-grey side. I have to say, as well, that I adore Sarah. She's a beautifully well-rounded and realistic character! I'm super excited to see where the plot goes, it's been interesting so far, and I'm eagerly awaiting more!
I love this! It feels incredibly realistic, and doesn't stray too far from the show's morally grey and gritty premise, while being a bit less depressing and dark (I think it's because no one's gotten their face crushed with a bowling ball). All of the characters really act and feel like they do in the show (especially Lantom, I'm amazed at how well you've written him), and I like how you don't shy away from (and even embrace!) Matt's darker, more morally-grey side. I have to say, as well, that I adore Sarah. She's a beautifully well-rounded and realistic character! I'm super excited to see where the plot goes, it's been interesting so far, and I'm eagerly awaiting more!
6/16/2015 c7 1Rhomea
This story is seriously fantastic! Just to let you know, I work early tomorrow, but I stayed up late because I literally couldn't stop. Call me weak-willed, I don't care.
You've done an awesome job with the dynamic between Matt and Sarah, and managed to keep it fast paced and suspenseful enough to keep attention. I thought Matt was a little too dark at first, but the more I think about it, the more I'm thinking that the reader is seeing Daredevil, who can honestly be described as mildly psychotic.
Please update again soon, I need more!
Seriously, super awesome job!
1RhomeaThis story is seriously fantastic! Just to let you know, I work early tomorrow, but I stayed up late because I literally couldn't stop. Call me weak-willed, I don't care.
You've done an awesome job with the dynamic between Matt and Sarah, and managed to keep it fast paced and suspenseful enough to keep attention. I thought Matt was a little too dark at first, but the more I think about it, the more I'm thinking that the reader is seeing Daredevil, who can honestly be described as mildly psychotic.
Please update again soon, I need more!
Seriously, super awesome job!
6/16/2015 c7 Guest
I am in love with this story! I just started watching the TV show and I'm reading this as I go along in the series. Please update soon! You have a real gift for writing :)
I am in love with this story! I just started watching the TV show and I'm reading this as I go along in the series. Please update soon! You have a real gift for writing :)
6/16/2015 c7 16TheHauntedKeyboard
I FREAKING LOVE YOUR STORY! It's seriously good, and I love how their relationship is progressing, thanks for the chapters!
16TheHauntedKeyboardI FREAKING LOVE YOUR STORY! It's seriously good, and I love how their relationship is progressing, thanks for the chapters!