
6/9/2015 c6 Nuualla
I'm literally freaking right now cause what better time for an update than my birthday :D this like a first present yay! :D Wow, this chapter was intense, poor Sarah :( I can't wait for the next chapter, this story is addicting! You should put it as a warning in the summary haha :D Please, please update as soon as possible.
I'm literally freaking right now cause what better time for an update than my birthday :D this like a first present yay! :D Wow, this chapter was intense, poor Sarah :( I can't wait for the next chapter, this story is addicting! You should put it as a warning in the summary haha :D Please, please update as soon as possible.
6/9/2015 c6 Dany
Oh dear, I feel so sorry for Sarah :/. I hope now that Matt knows he won't be as harsh towards her, she doesn't deserve it. Anyway Sarah is a really well written character and you have Matt spot on (it's took me ages to find a well written Matt/OC, thank the lord I found this). I can't wait until the next chapter! I check every single day to see if you've updated and it makes my day 10x better when you have.
Have a nice day!
Oh dear, I feel so sorry for Sarah :/. I hope now that Matt knows he won't be as harsh towards her, she doesn't deserve it. Anyway Sarah is a really well written character and you have Matt spot on (it's took me ages to find a well written Matt/OC, thank the lord I found this). I can't wait until the next chapter! I check every single day to see if you've updated and it makes my day 10x better when you have.
Have a nice day!
6/7/2015 c3 Guest
Clever old woman
Clever old woman
6/6/2015 c5 simmari
Loved that we got more of a look into sarah's inner workings of what makes up/is important in her life here with her interaction with her dad I loved the relationship you showed here. And I really like how she's so devoted about caring for her father that she makes herself stick to her crappy job that kind of makes her a hero in her own right even if her actual life is a mess. As as hhow much she loves him Iis re nice to see :) cqncan't wait for more Sarah and matt
Loved that we got more of a look into sarah's inner workings of what makes up/is important in her life here with her interaction with her dad I loved the relationship you showed here. And I really like how she's so devoted about caring for her father that she makes herself stick to her crappy job that kind of makes her a hero in her own right even if her actual life is a mess. As as hhow much she loves him Iis re nice to see :) cqncan't wait for more Sarah and matt
6/5/2015 c5 Nyx-Arae
Yeah, a new chapter! I like, I love it, I adore it. My sixth sense is tingling... I sense that Matty is in full blown panic, with his little spy missing from home and not calling on the phone :D
Yeah, a new chapter! I like, I love it, I adore it. My sixth sense is tingling... I sense that Matty is in full blown panic, with his little spy missing from home and not calling on the phone :D
6/4/2015 c5 Joyful Jude
You have a talent for making the reader sympathize with the protagonist. I'm loving Sarah's backstory. Great character development.
Really looking forward to the next chapter and some more interaction between Sarah and Matt.
I know you're probably a busy individual so it's really refreshing to be getting so many chapters so quickly. Keep them coming! :-)
You have a talent for making the reader sympathize with the protagonist. I'm loving Sarah's backstory. Great character development.
Really looking forward to the next chapter and some more interaction between Sarah and Matt.
I know you're probably a busy individual so it's really refreshing to be getting so many chapters so quickly. Keep them coming! :-)
6/4/2015 c1 Amythra
I want to make clear that I haven't yet read chapter 5, I just log in and saw an update for this story and I was literally: "omg! YEAH *fist pump*". Just wanted to let you know what I think about your story :D and now I'm off to happily read about Matt and Sarah!
I want to make clear that I haven't yet read chapter 5, I just log in and saw an update for this story and I was literally: "omg! YEAH *fist pump*". Just wanted to let you know what I think about your story :D and now I'm off to happily read about Matt and Sarah!
6/4/2015 c5 Nuualla
I loved this chapter. As much as I love reading about her interactions with Matt, it was nice to actually get to know more about Sarah. Please, update as soon as possible, I'm really not good at waiting :D And you have a whole army of your fangirls waiting for the next chapter right now :D But it's worth a wait ;)
I loved this chapter. As much as I love reading about her interactions with Matt, it was nice to actually get to know more about Sarah. Please, update as soon as possible, I'm really not good at waiting :D And you have a whole army of your fangirls waiting for the next chapter right now :D But it's worth a wait ;)