9/16/2022 c6 Kira Hanabusa
C’mon bro 6 years… Don’t leave us hangin’ … I got engrossed into the story just for it to be left on a major cliffhanger coz that’s a real d!ck move bro.
C’mon bro 6 years… Don’t leave us hangin’ … I got engrossed into the story just for it to be left on a major cliffhanger coz that’s a real d!ck move bro.
4/24/2022 c6 Guest
GOOD STORY BUT SHITTY THAT THIS STORYLINE NOT EVEN COMPLETED
WHY POST IF NOT GOING TO FINISH THE STORYLINE?
GOOD STORY BUT SHITTY THAT THIS STORYLINE NOT EVEN COMPLETED
WHY POST IF NOT GOING TO FINISH THE STORYLINE?
4/23/2022 c6 prince.d.kratos
its a great a great story but for it to leave off like this is plain cruelty
its a great a great story but for it to leave off like this is plain cruelty
4/23/2022 c6 Patrick Tipton
Hey I'm enjoying the story and I can't wait to see how you have him handle something like this I'm quite curious and I'm dying to know I hope you update the story soon
Hey I'm enjoying the story and I can't wait to see how you have him handle something like this I'm quite curious and I'm dying to know I hope you update the story soon
5/12/2021 c2 Guest
This is so lame. If he wanted to change the future there are so many ways to do it instead of becoming someone else's slave again. He has the power, knowledge of what will happen, knowledge of people including the leaders. But yeah lets go back to being a slave again so that I would be limited in moving around and actually train people to become strong. Yeah thats a very good fucking idea.
This is so lame. If he wanted to change the future there are so many ways to do it instead of becoming someone else's slave again. He has the power, knowledge of what will happen, knowledge of people including the leaders. But yeah lets go back to being a slave again so that I would be limited in moving around and actually train people to become strong. Yeah thats a very good fucking idea.
5/12/2021 c1 Guest
Come on. 5000 years of life and all he is, is an Ultimate Class devil power? I would have expected more.
Come on. 5000 years of life and all he is, is an Ultimate Class devil power? I would have expected more.
4/14/2020 c6 1HollowLament
good story. this has a lot of protential, it is very interesting. hopefully you will continue this.
good story. this has a lot of protential, it is very interesting. hopefully you will continue this.
10/5/2018 c6 Albert L
This is a really good story I hope it's updated soon I know it's been 2 years but I'll have hope.
This is a really good story I hope it's updated soon I know it's been 2 years but I'll have hope.