for Time Again4/16/2016 c6 
6Lightningblade49
ok Rias somehow remembers and I assume it's all because of that mystery dude with the red eyes.
6Lightningblade49ok Rias somehow remembers and I assume it's all because of that mystery dude with the red eyes.
3/8/2016 c5 Guest
Dude pls update this story is amazing
Dude pls update this story is amazing
12/14/2015 c1 gyoaraku
please write more I LOVE IT
please write more I LOVE IT
12/2/2015 c5 7Animefortin95
I want more for this story. Hurry up and continue I get impatient when reading good stories.
7Animefortin95I want more for this story. Hurry up and continue I get impatient when reading good stories.
8/31/2015 c5 NotSirzechs
...Too many things are going his way, and I sincerely doubt Issei can order Grayfia atround 'just like that'.
I love OP fics, but I HATE senseless OP fics with a passion. There's a fine line between Overpowered Experience and Gary Stuism and that thing with Grayfia almost counts. Grayfia is not weak, she was a Maou candidate and could very well be the fifth ruling power in the Underworld...But you know what happened ;P
You strained my suspension of disbelief with that stunt. Do you honestly think Grayfia or Sirzech would just abide the words of a higher power just because he's affiliated with Rias? On the contrary, they'd be extremely suspicious and wary of this hidden power.
WHAT I THINK you should have done is to play with Grayfia's sense of loyalty and care for Sirzechs and their family, and to stress the urgency of the current matter to the point she would follow Ise's request JUST THIS ONCE for the good of her family.
Besides, it's what Sirzechs would do as well.
It's too much of a stretch I think for War Veterans like Grayfia to bow down to anyone other than her husband. DA GUREITO RUCIFAAAAH.
...Too many things are going his way, and I sincerely doubt Issei can order Grayfia atround 'just like that'.
I love OP fics, but I HATE senseless OP fics with a passion. There's a fine line between Overpowered Experience and Gary Stuism and that thing with Grayfia almost counts. Grayfia is not weak, she was a Maou candidate and could very well be the fifth ruling power in the Underworld...But you know what happened ;P
You strained my suspension of disbelief with that stunt. Do you honestly think Grayfia or Sirzech would just abide the words of a higher power just because he's affiliated with Rias? On the contrary, they'd be extremely suspicious and wary of this hidden power.
WHAT I THINK you should have done is to play with Grayfia's sense of loyalty and care for Sirzechs and their family, and to stress the urgency of the current matter to the point she would follow Ise's request JUST THIS ONCE for the good of her family.
Besides, it's what Sirzechs would do as well.
It's too much of a stretch I think for War Veterans like Grayfia to bow down to anyone other than her husband. DA GUREITO RUCIFAAAAH.
8/25/2015 c5 Guest
I like where this is going plz update soon
I like where this is going plz update soon
8/26/2015 c5 39Mystic the Kitsune
i like it and cant wait for issei's big reveal at the rating game rias will be so mad
39Mystic the Kitsunei like it and cant wait for issei's big reveal at the rating game rias will be so mad