5/23/2015 c2 Sennybee98
Oh I can't wait to see Issei kill that fallen ho. But why does he need to keep his identity a secret to gain those pieces?

5/22/2015 c2 1BoundlessVortigern
You know sometimes i wish that some fics just go original,and also Issei is that powerful Rias wont be able to ressurect him anyway,meaning she cant get Issei as her pawn.

5/22/2015 c2 0208
Asia chapter were?
oh the only thing for me is i read to fast and so for me most of time chapters seem to short xD
i just went like what end?

5/20/2015 c1 ThatAnon
The first time, Raynare died anyway, right? Why not make it different this time? Seeing Issei with 12 devil wings & in Balance Breaker mode, any fallen angel would shit their pants. Why not make Raynare shit her pants? Why not give her a thoroughly vengeful beating? But keep her alive to do his bidding.
like, seriously, she never stopped wearing the bracelet Issei bought her, in cannon. She had to have been swayed by Kokabiel. Or else, why would she have gone against Azazel's orders?
I propose, IsseixRaynare, if possible. or add her to his harem, forcefully at that, as her eternal punishment for killing him once.
We saw almost every girl in the series paired up for Issei's harem. But not Raynare.
I still don't understand if Akeno was born as a half devil-half fallen angel, or was later reincarnated by Rias. Why not make Raynare the same? Just that Rias reincarnates her after Issei gives her the punishment. Or you could make it happen as Issei kills her. BUT Rias proposes that she can be a valuable asset to her peerage & that they can extract some info about fallen angel plans, & so she gets reincarnated as a devil, WITH a mutation peice, perhaps. That would be needed to reincarnate her as a devil, right? because of her being a faplen angel? gives the story depth.
Of course Raynare won't be overly willing to do all that. Issei will need to sway her loyalties on his side. Either by some violence or I dont know, a few dates maybe?
Like, they looked so cute together! & her being a fallen angel, it's clear that her mind would always be in a gutter. like, BDSM outfits? like seriously? she wore a bdsm outfit for her real appearance. she'll perfectly fit the condition of being in Issei's harem. & yeah, he does like big OPPAI, right? thats reason enough for ISSEI to spare her. but yeah, I know he changed, 5000 year old & all, but... who could resist a sexy curvy black haired(No offence to any other coloured haired people) fallen angel? Raynare at that? I know that Issei won't.
you get what I'm saying at, right? :)
now, by all means, the starting was awesome! I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter. :)

5/19/2015 c1 Darksire64
Honestly cant wait to see how or where you take this story. A 5k year old issei? Now thats something i want to see. Cant wait till you update again!

5/19/2015 c1 4the DragonBard
Interesting.

One thing, Juggernaut Drive is because of a curse laid on the Sacred Gears. Unless the time travel brought it back, it 'can't' reactivate, because Issei broke the curse before he got Cardinal Crimson Queen.

Also, Issei seems more enraged about Raynare than he was 'before.'

Not sure Rias can reincarnate Issei, as he already has Eight pawn pieces in him already. Plus, he's so much more powerful than he was before, might require even 'more' Pawn pieces, which is impossible for Rias at this time.

Only reason it worked before, when he got the new body, was because he was still linked to them, just needed them put back in.

5/19/2015 c1 2ArkHunterRory
Interesting. I look forward to future chapters.